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Fic: A Most Noble Undertaking 4/6 (Doctor Who; Doctor/Rose; realignment 'verse)

Dec 08, 2008 17:14

Story Title: A Most Noble Undertaking (4/6)
Series Title: part of the Realignment universe
Author: butterfly
Summary: Some reunions are just meant to be.
Pairing: Doctor/Rose
Rating: PG-13.
Warning: AU after Doctor Who 3x13 - "Last of the Time Lords".

Part One; Part Two; Part Three

( In which the Doctor isn't pretty and Donna collects some paperweights )

realignment, doctor who, fic

Comments 4

shinyopals December 9 2008, 01:42:20 UTC

Ooh, very interesting!

I love the interaction between the Doctor and Donna - Donna's brashness and tenderness and his failure to understand the simplest little things. His acknowledgement that she saved him, even if he couldn't put it to words, was good.

How the Doctor sees the world was interesting - a bit of an expansion on the stuff in Pompeii and I definitely liked the peak inside his head.

As always, I liked the references to the previous companions!

And I'm *really* looking forward to Donna meeting Rose!

butterfly December 10 2008, 12:56:43 UTC

Thank you!

I love the interaction between the Doctor and Donna - Donna's brashness and tenderness and his failure to understand the simplest little things. His acknowledgement that she saved him, even if he couldn't put it to words, was good.

I really enjoy their relationship. It's a lot of fun to watch and definitely enjoyable to write.

How the Doctor sees the world was interesting - a bit of an expansion on the stuff in Pompeii and I definitely liked the peak inside his head.

It's really neat to think of the different ways that Time Lord thinking might be different from the ways that humans think.

And I'm *really* looking forward to Donna meeting Rose!

Donna is also very much looking forward to that!

debs7 December 18 2008, 02:55:25 UTC

Oh yay! I've missed this fic and have been regularly checking your journal to see if a new chapter is up.

I'm really liking the way you get inside the Doctor's head. It all makes more sense.

butterfly December 19 2008, 14:10:18 UTC

Thank you very much! The next chapter is being delayed both because of the school and because of the crack-fic that ate my brain, but it should be up before Christmas.

I'm really liking the way you get inside the Doctor's head. It all makes more sense.

It's really interesting to try to dive into the Doctor's head and make it all consistent but still try to have a flavor of 'alien' nature in there, to make it so that there are some human things that just don't make sense to him.