[Fanfic] Missing Piece : Chapter 3

[butanorabu]

Title: Missing Piece

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Comments

[yum_gums]

it's a nice fic and all. but sometimes it's hard to understand because of the grammatical errors. uuumm...do you have a beta??? i dont mean to upset you or anything. think of this as "constructive criticism". hehe

i guess you had to kill off Pi to make way for Ryo...hahaha so this is going to be a Ryo/Shige fic from now on.

If I were Pi, would I do the same thing as him? Giving his heart for this guy?--->good question Ryo. hahahah

waiting for the next chapter.

[setsuna_31]

Wahhh~! Sorry for that. TT_________TT its just the two of us checking for our errors. >_<

Thanks for reading and for the comment as well, thanks. ^^

[roughmetal2]

uhm, i know this is a fic but i think no one is allowed to simply sacrifice his life for another without any compelling reason. it would have been better if Pi was sick himself or was in an accident. well, putting that matter aside, actually i had this inkling that his brother is ryo. though you could have simply made ryo his older brother instead of a twin coz i couldn't imagine them as such. nevertheless, story-wise, this is interesting especially with ryo around. so this turned from shigepi to nishikato...which happened to be my OTP so i'm still ok with this.

[setsuna_31]

I was thinking about a accident, but I just got inspired over a jdrama, which is the main guy donated his heart over his male lover. (Yaoi. XDD) just that part deshu~

Thanks for reading and also for the comment deshu~! ^^

[dephi]

Hey.. This should be shigepi fic right? Then why lara chan~~
*fake sobbing*
EH!RYO!! I thought his twin must be Jin.. xDD
Ahh.. Waiting for Winnie chan then~
AHH.. WHY PI!! *pouts*

[setsuna_31]

*nods* gomen~~ thats why there's some pairings to come. *grins*

Its Ryo-chan~ <333

Yeah, let's wait for her turn. She should work first on your collab. fic first. Its so cute~!

[dephi]

Un un.. But.. But.. Huaa.. :(
Haha.. Ryo chan ne~
Yes2, though I asked her to update not alone first.. xDD
I'm so greedy now, want her to update kidnapping, not alone, and this.. xDDD
Eh, cute? haha.. I'm not really good at that type of fic actually, most of my fics are angst.. xDD

[keeconk]

pi is gone?? FOREVER???
ehhhhhhhhhh???

and it's turning to a nishikato fic??
this is interesting...
i cant wait for more.. ^__^

[setsuna_31]

Yes darling~ Pi's gone...
Yes. A Nishikato...

[redkittygal]

that was sad, but i like the turn that the story has taken. thanks, update soon

[setsuna_31]

Let's wait for Winnie-chan for her next updates deshu~