dan's song II

[burnupthecity]

I've re-worked the song in the previous post. Expanded it I guess you could say.

Comments

[lofty_chica]

I'd say, keep it the way as it is now! However, it's all up to you. ;>]

[beneaththeburn]

i love the re-work. the emotion is still there, but this time around there's much more imagery.