The point is lost when you have to dream awake

Jul 01, 2010 09:49

Title: the point is lost when you have to dream awake
Characters: Serena
Rating/Word count: PG-13/ 3,417
One line excerpt: Truth: It sucks being Serena Van der Woodsen.

Truth: Serena Van der Woodsen abandons people. )

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slimybunny July 2 2010, 04:27:37 UTC
Yeah, I think that while the other characters wear their angst on the outside, Serena's is just buried so deep under all these layers of denial and stereotypes. Makes for an interesting subject :)

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stormsandsins July 2 2010, 02:35:30 UTC
Oh my God, this was gorgeous. I laughed (She has great friends who've affectionally dubbed themselves the 'Non-Judging Breakfast Club' after Chuck taped Nate's butt-cheeks together) lol) and I ached for her.

I didn't used to be a great fan of Serena; in fact I disliked her at first. But this is one of those fics that are gradually making me understand why she's the way she is, why she's an attention-seeker despite herself. Very tragic.

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slimybunny July 2 2010, 04:32:41 UTC
Yeah! I totally get what you mean. I really, really hated Serena when I started watching Gossip Girl, but after joining Postgossipism I kinda warmed up to Serena and I guess this is me warming up all the way.

And yes, my brain is totally cracky and I can totally see Chuck taping Nate's butt-cheeks together.

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artemisphoenix July 2 2010, 03:23:37 UTC
Leaving: I love the bit about Pete/Chuck. *SOBS* S loves him! And all the husbands are great insight. CECE! I LOVE YOU! *giggles* And Carter Baizen, a high schooler, is flirting with her. OH NOES! ;)

But...the SN bits. OMG, that made me want to cry. gah. he asked her to be his girlfriend. She left. Returned to BN. *SOBS*

DAN. Can we kill him? I approve of that. I like that part. Poor Serena. At least she seems to realize it in this fic. And the author? Oh man, that is awesome!

Dan looks like he's just gotten rickrolled
ROTFLMAO. You win at life.

Love the run-on sentence. And she loves Blair's look. She wishes someone would just see HER. ♥

The SL convo about Eric. Good, those women. (I hate you, Lily.)

I really love this insight on Serena.

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slimybunny July 2 2010, 04:41:15 UTC
I know! I was writing it and I just saw all these parallels between Pete and Chuck. I actually really wanted to write something about that for that screencap of Serena and Chuck in that orange coat.

You win at life. Thank you, thank you: Never going to give you uppppp.

That convo about Eric was really hard to write because I didn't want it to sound evil and make them unsympathetic but I also wanted it to be cold and real to what these two people would say.

I'm really glad you liked it!

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artemisphoenix July 2 2010, 06:43:18 UTC
Well, you can submit up to three, so SC please? *bats eyelashes*

I think you handled the Eric bit perfectly. We totally knew where S was coming from. And that's just classic Lily.

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slimybunny July 2 2010, 04:41:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it :)

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slimybunny July 3 2010, 18:00:49 UTC
Aw, thank you. Even your reviews sound poetic.

BTW love your icon.

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