Comments | burnthe_city: don't stand so close to me

slimybunny in burnthe_city

don't stand so close to me

Sep 26, 2010 01:43

Title: don't stand so close to me
Characters: Rufus, Vanessa
Rating/Word Count: PG/372
One-Line Excerpt: Lolita is not a love story. Rufus has to read it twice before he figures it out.

( Lolita is not a love story. Rufus has to read it twice before he figures it out. )

challenge 006, :slimybunny

Comments 6

artemisphoenix September 26 2010, 03:19:49 UTC

Duh, Rufus is a pedo! :P But it made me smile throughout! ;)

At least one Humphrey can full appreciate her.

slimybunny September 30 2010, 11:30:55 UTC

Of course he's loved her all his life! Their relationship is all types of Freudian but Rufus "used to be a rockstar" so it comes with the territory.

Thanks for reading :)

p_drunkwriting September 26 2010, 10:52:38 UTC

The first line sold me, and it was thoroughly amazing. I like how it's short but ~poignant at the same time, you know?

Vufus should happen, Schwartz obviously can't see potential even when it's right in front of him.

slimybunny September 30 2010, 11:40:05 UTC

The first line was my favorite too :P

I'm glad you liked it!

fairmostfatal September 29 2010, 13:18:25 UTC

Vufus rocks my world. I need this show to get a little sicker. Good job :)

slimybunny September 30 2010, 11:58:51 UTC

VUFUS FTW. Schwartz needs to get on this like white on toast. ASAP.