Decided

Aug 21, 2010 01:31

Title: Decided
Characters: Rufus, Lily, Vanessa
Rating/Word Count: R / 1034
One-Line Excerpt: Her name is Vanessa and there's no possible way he could've forgotten it, because he's known her since she was nine. He also knows that this is wrong and terrible and she is still naked.

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frozenmolasses August 21 2010, 23:46:16 UTC
THANK YOU, BBY! ♥

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p_drunkwriting August 21 2010, 20:58:59 UTC
Too wonderful for words. I absolutely love this, it's amazing. It's surprisingly in character, which I think would have been difficult to achieve despite the constant eye-sex they have.

Vanessa/Rufus is a guilty pleasure of mine and you satisfied my ~desires when it comes to them.

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frozenmolasses August 21 2010, 23:49:43 UTC
Thank you! I wanted to included some eye!sex in this, tbh, because it's, like, their thing, but alas, I ended up with actual sex. xD

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frozenmolasses August 21 2010, 23:52:39 UTC
Thank you!

Vufus = <3, but I really do love me some old school Rufus/Lily, from before they got lame (aka S2 onward), so it was a pleasure to combine both of those into one fic.

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thmaymuc August 21 2010, 22:27:12 UTC
!!!
I hoped that was you.

How wonderful! I adore you for this, it's amazing. The young!RL bit is so lovely, and the way you worked with the prompt with this parallel is all splendiferous. AND THE VUFUS JUST COMPLETES ME. TY.

omg, why did I delete my Vufus icon? D :

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frozenmolasses August 21 2010, 23:55:30 UTC
ARE YOU THE LOVELY ANON WHO REQUESTED IT?

Thank you, bb! I honestly don't know why I don't have a Vufus icon of my own, because everyone in the entire fandom obviously needs one.

(also, splendiferous? tyvm and A+ word.)

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thmaymuc August 22 2010, 01:31:16 UTC
OF COURSE I AM! : D And probably also some anons that replied and thought that was a fabulous idea

Well, I'll just have my Dan icon checkin' out your Chace icon, that's also ver appropriate.

(Splendiferous is one of my favourite words ever. And I only use it for special occasions, so feel the ♥)

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artemisphoenix August 21 2010, 23:08:42 UTC
I love you. You are AMAZING.

I'm not an LR fan, but I totally enjoyed the first part, especially since the song and the drunkeness and forgetting the other bit bit was just hilarious.

(Also, Susan as in... *cough* or me just wishfully thinking?)

What an upstanding guy Rufus is. Waiting for her to be at least 18 before going for it. lol

This is the first VR I've read, but if people wrote it seriously like you did, I would read more. This much happen this season.

Embrace it, Humphrey!

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frozenmolasses August 22 2010, 00:01:22 UTC
Thank you! ♥

I quite liked them in S1, and in my mind they were awesome pre-series.

Hehe. That was honestly the first name that came to mind, but I considered changing it, just so it didn't seem like I was... making a reference to anyone. *ahem* So, if you choose to perceive it as such, there's really nothing at all that I can do to stop you. ;)

See, I love Vufus sfm, but I think the problem is that it's so lulzy that it can be difficult to take seriously when writing fic. The only thing that kept this from turing into total crack!fic was probably the prompt, tbh, but I'm sorta glad it didn't.

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artemisphoenix August 22 2010, 00:18:42 UTC
It's because her name is the most mentioned on the anon comm that it got stuck. ;)

I'm up for crackiness, but I've heard people write VR because they hate both characters, and why write just to bash, you know? They're a crack!ship, and it's funny but Jess/Matthew and even the writers (come on, Dan and Jenny walked out of the room!) do this to us. WE NEED MORE.

I'm going to pimp this fic out. It's too awesome. :)

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