Cinderella Snow

Aug 07, 2010 17:42

Title: Cinderella Snow
Characters: Nate, Blair
Rating/Word Count: PG/2108
One-Line Excerpt: I was bribing the receptionist at a luxurious B&B when I spotted her, standing by the lake in the back feeding ducks in her beret like nothing had changed.

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challenge 003, :lokiyan

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graygale August 8 2010, 03:11:05 UTC
This was good to read.

Especially, since it sounds like Nate really wanted to be there for Blair, after being apart for so long.

Enjoyed it, a lot.

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artemisphoenix August 8 2010, 07:01:14 UTC
I love the Cinderella use with the ear muffs! *giggles*

Poor B, but she needs help.

I love that Nate kept waiting! I will assume happy ending for BN because I'm hopeful and a sap like that. ♥

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missedshapes August 8 2010, 10:10:02 UTC
♥! I love the twist you gave the Cinderella story, especially with the prince arriving at the ball. Nate is so sweet here! And I want to hug Blair. Her problems that don't revolve around social-climbing or being a guy's emotional punching bag need to be fleshed out more.

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