Fear and Loathing Through the Mirror

[lunasol28]

Title: Fear and Loathing Through the Mirror
Characters: Blair, Jack, Chuck
Rating/Word Count: R { 948
One-line Excerpt: They are face to face and chest to chest and he only gives her a second before his mouth is on hers.

Comments

[graygale]

This was excellent to read. Enjoyed it, a lot.

It wouldn't be surprising that Jack would take any opportunity to make things difficult for Blair & Chuck.

Thankfully, Jack left anyway--still the only way Blair could erase his presence was knowing that Chuck was there.

[lunasol28]

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[artemisphoenix]

OMG, this sent insane shivers over my body. The man is a creeper and I hope he does try to get near B again so he can be murdered. That would be FUN. *shivers*

I'm glad Blair managed to hold herself together while he was there. And I'm glad that she told Chuck.

The crown bit confused me though. Wha? I don't get it....

[lunasol28]

Thank you! The line about her touching the crown of her head was supposed to be a play on words to convey what the glint is that she and Jack see. It's like she's always been Queen B but she hasn't really believed in herself until now, it's always been about what other people see. I knew it was a stretch but I decided to leave it in.

I'm working on the DV fic. It's going to be a five times one. I'm liking it so far and already have two of the times written and I'm excited to see where it goes. I have an ending in mind that I want to reach cohesively which is helpful because I don't want my writing to just runaway with me lol

[artemisphoenix]

OMG, I love you. message me when you post. Imma go tell my DV girls about fic!!!!

OH! I get the crown bit. I like that. That makes a lot of sense. I definitely see what you mean. Great job!