Prison Break Fic: Deliverance (1/1)

[burntcircles]

Summary: Their new beginning has finally arrived.
Characters/Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi, Fernando Sucre/Maricruz Delgado
Genre/Rating: Het / PG
Length: ~1,200 words
Author's Note: Written for misa_is_love, who is very sad at the recent turn of events. At what seems like an eternity ago I promised you a fic, sweetheart, and here it is, long overdue and

Comments

[misa_is_love]

Oh my...I don't even know what to say! Thank you so much dear *hugs*

This was so beautiful and is an ending I'd very much like to see from our show. I've sort of made my peace with recent events so I feel a lot better just now. I just want to enjoy what we have left :)

Anyway, thanks again. You are wonderful! Hope you're well love!

[burntcircles]

That is exactly how I feel, too! Knowing that we don't have very long makes me want to cherish each and every scene of this show so much more.

So happy that you're feeling better. *hugs you back* And look at those two in your icon! kh;fahgkjah;gkls!

[linzi20]

Ooh, what a nice surprise. I love it when burntcirclesfic shows up on my flist.

The whole piece has a lovely feel, but (of course) I love the intimacy between Michael and Sara. The fact that she doens't want LJ to leave is so believeable and heartbreaking at the same time.

Loved this!

[burntcircles]

Oh, thanks Linz. I know that we never see it in canon, but I always get into "Sara-protects-LJ-with-her-life" mode. *facepalms*

I appreciate the kind words, dear.

xx

[chapter_stork]

Oh, the beach, everybody healthy and tanned and surfing and together. This is perfection.

And I haven't read a 'happy ever after' fic in what seems like ages. Maybe because lately it's been hard to keep the faith, but reading this makes me feel very hopeful. Thanks for the positive vibes.

I wonder about the last conversation between Sucre and Michael, where Sucre makes the comment about Michael "keeping score". That puzzled me, because I don't think of Michael that way? *Ponders* I'd be interested in hearing more of your thoughts on that, if you're inclined to do so.

Anyhoo. I was so glad to see a post from you! We need more of your stubborn optimism in these trying times :)

[burntcircles]

You're right, Michael doesn't keep a running account of who owes him what. It's purely one-sided: it's all about what people have done for him and how he has to give back, hence Sucre remembering Michael's "Linc and I owe you so much..." line. Sucre knows this, and he wants it to stop, but because (I think) he knows the usual line of argument wouldn't do, he resorts saying "keeping score". To put it this way would make it seem like Sucre thinks Michael is being selfish. Michael, of course, knows what Sucre is doing (thus he smirks) but he understands.

It's like how men talk to each other, totally getting the message in so few words. That was what I was trying for, I think. Needs polishing? *g*

About the happy-ever-after...you know me. Me and my happy endings are bonded for life. :) Thanks, Viva. Glad to give you positive vibes.

[burntcircles]

Hi, Maureen. I know we'll never get this, but I love to think it, anyway. Thanks for the words! *hugs*

[katie_crumbles]

Hi! This is a lovely piece :)

I've always loved the friendship between Michael and Fernando because i think it is something unexpected for both of them. I think Sucre never even imagined that he could be best friends with a genius, and Michael before Fox River may have been too uptight for a happy-go-lucky dude like Fernando. But they are surprisingly accepting of each others 'quirks', if you may, and that's what makes the bond stronger.

[burntcircles]

That is what I like about their friendship too, that it was so unexpected and yet, in a strange sort of way, they fit. AN and WMIII have great chemistry, and IMHO you cannot pull off this relationship without that. So kudos to the actors. I do miss seeing them together *sniffs* Thanks for reading, dear.

[katie_crumbles]

*sniffs* with you :)

you're welcome. so good to hear from you again!