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lkm_52 May 10 2011, 19:11:39 UTC
This actually hurt to read. Please post the alternate ending.

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burntace_skins May 12 2011, 08:48:57 UTC
Sorry it hurt...maybe this will be better? Alternate, happier ending

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pomkeygeekange May 12 2011, 23:25:43 UTC
That was disturbing but the alt ending made it all better!

Both were well written and excellent and I can so see Dark Jack doing this.

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jo02 May 23 2011, 02:57:11 UTC

I'm not sure which is more disturbing - your story, or the fact I, um, enjoyed it very much! **runs far away**

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