Doctor Who - Doctor & Master - PG - The Last Two (1)

[burning_eagle]

Title: The Last Two (part 1)
Author: Ema (lightningrapier)
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing: The Doctor & The Master
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 3,210.
Notes: This isn't too impressive just yet - nearly all of the dialogue in this bit is taken from End of Time Part 2. Basically, I've been wanting to re-write the end of "End of Time" because I found it to be,

Comments

[edzel2]

Oh wow, this is brilliant! I really can't wait for the next part, you have no idea!

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the way you've written the Master! As I said before in a comment to your 'Untitled' fic (I've been thinking and I reckon 'Virtual Reality' might be a good title for it? If you're inviting suggestions, that is - if you're not, sorry; as a writer who can't start work on a story until I've chosen a title, I just couldn't help myself...) I think your Master is brilliantly canon.

[burning_eagle]

Thank you so much! :D

Ah, yes! Not a bad title at all. Thanks! I never feel right naming things until they're done (naming this, since it's part 1 in a series, was particularly difficult for me and I still may end up changing the name) and even then names rarely come to me. :/ I'll go add that as the title now though, since seeing so many "UNTITLED"s in my writing journal makes me sad.

I really appreciate your comments on my Master, they give me confidence!! Like I said before, he's so tough and I end up thinking and re-thinking and re-re-thinking how I write him, which is really nerve-wrecking, as I'm sure you know. He's so frustrating, but then, I guess he can't really be any other way. XD

[mars_of_war]

So much of my stuff in here is "untitled" or titled with things I feel are lacking. I'm so awful with titles. It's not just your fault that this journal is full of "untitled"s.

[edited for unnecessary comma]

[burning_eagle]

lmao that sylar icon

Yes, I know. D: I suck at titles. The only one I don't hate basically is like, "Sleeper Agent". I actually love that title. And that's about it. Really. D: And I guess this doesn't have a bad title.

yeah. failures. both of us.

DIAMONDS

[mars_of_war]

I'M ON A HORSE.

Seriously, though, I love this. Your Master is amazing. I could never have written mine if not for yours.

/swoons

[burning_eagle]

LOL for a minute when this came in my inbox, I thought you'd changed your name to "DIAMONDS" which I found amusing. Then I realized it was your subject for this comment. And I felt dumb.

you're too sweets to mes. ♥ thanks one million talk to you later

[mars_of_war]

I should change my name to DIAMONDS. It's just Mars of War. I've thought about setting it as 14112 since that's my name everywhere else. I wish it was my LJ name. :(

I may be sweets, but it's only a bi-product of honesty. You just make it so easy.

Enough circle-jerking. I love your writing though and I love this writing in particular.

Give that man some soup.

[lightningrapier]

Thank you very much!! I got this comment just as I was working on part 2, kind of funny. XD

[darklyenigmatic]

This is fantastic! You've got that melancholy at the start, the subtlety and depth, and then bam, right into the manic, thrilling actions of the regeneration and the crash! Made me grin like a loon, just a like the show does. Anyway, can't wait to read more and see where this is going :-D