H50 - Fanfic - Your breath is what revives me

[burned_phoenix]

Title: Your breath is what revives me
Author: burned_phoenix
Rating: PG-13 ?
Characters/Pairings: Steve McGarrett, Danny Williams, Kono Kalakaua, Chin Ho Kelly, mentions of Joe White, Mary-Ann McGarrett, Grace Williams and Rachel Edwards; pre-slash or strong bromance, you decide what you want
Spoilers/Universe: -
Wordcount: 1.811
Summary: Steve died on a

Comments

[gotulloch]

Good story. Call me vicious but I would love to read the confrontation between Steve and Joe. Danny and Joe would be good too. Not sure I could take Gracie's reaction to seeing her Super Seal back, it would break my heart even more than this did.

[burned_phoenix]

thank you!

hehe, you're kinda giving me ideas (and then I just had a few more of my own) though I really wanted this to be it. maybe I'll get back to it when I'm done with my other WIPs or when I have a dull moment :)

[ambard10]

i like it very much, its very emotional and i love the happy endings. congrtulations

[burned_phoenix]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[bfive0]

This hurt so much in a very good comforting way!!

[burned_phoenix]

aww, thank you!!!! :)

[abbeyrd62561]

Great job! poor Danny and Steve, so glad that Steve punched Joe for all this. Danny wearing the fake dog tags and Steve having to hold him until he finally stopped. Wow, just wonderful and the team coming in with seeing Danny that way but will find out it's all good.

[burned_phoenix]

oh, boy did he punch him :D I'm tempted to do a 'deleted scene' of that :D

thank you so much for this lovely comment! :) I'm glad you liked it :)

[burned_phoenix]

thank you! :) I'm glad you think so :)