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H50 - Fanfic - I love my car!

Nov 20, 2011 12:43

Title: I love my car!
Author: burned_phoenix
Rating: NC17
Characters/Pairings: Steve McGarrett/ Danny Williams
Spoilers/Universe: -
Wordcount: 1.829
Summary: Steve’s head is about to explode. Something snapps.
Warnings/ Genre: first time, pwp, outdoor, slight D/S undertones
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine, obviously, and I don’t make money out of this ( Read more... )

*fanfic, tv: hawaii 5-0

Comments 21

simplyn2deep November 20 2011, 12:24:17 UTC

well now...that was very hot indeed!

burned_phoenix November 20 2011, 13:03:04 UTC

why Thank You! glad you liked it :)

check out my other h50 if you haven't already? :)

annabel1984 December 29 2011, 22:21:29 UTC

Just love ur icon! x

burned_phoenix January 1 2012, 19:53:41 UTC

hee, thanks! yours is awesome too though!

need more h50 icons soon I guess *g*

australian_mum November 20 2011, 12:32:48 UTC

Wow. Just ... wow. That is a hell of an image you have burnt into our brains.

The moral of the story: car manufacturers should stop draping scantily clad women over the hoods of their cars in ads, and start draping scantily clad Steves and Dannys over them, instead. Would certainly assist in my purchasing decision!

burned_phoenix November 20 2011, 13:01:06 UTC

thank you! :D I know what you mean, I had the same 'problem' of that image burned into my brain, so I had to write it out :D

and I do agree, more women would buy cars if there were more hot guys having sex on the hoods in the ads *G*

oh, and if you haven't already, check out my other h50 fic? no sex there though. and there's more to come at some point I think :)

dante_s_hell November 20 2011, 16:45:57 UTC

Awesomely brilliant!

burned_phoenix November 22 2011, 12:22:04 UTC

thanks a LOT! seriously. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! :)

americandirrty November 20 2011, 17:30:28 UTC

So hot, I love this!!

burned_phoenix November 22 2011, 12:21:15 UTC

THANK YOU! :) glad you enjoyed it! and thanks for commenting :)

debarouchi November 20 2011, 18:45:41 UTC

Ahh the imagery. I'm telling you, that yellow shirt, Danny draped over the hood is just about perfection. No wonder Steve snapped!

Happy to see this posted honey. Just noticed a typo, you have pressed his food down instead of foot.
*smishes*

burned_phoenix November 22 2011, 12:20:03 UTC

whooops! :D thanks for pointing that out :D

so glad it turned out to your approval :D how about the ending, better now?? :D