FIC: Murinea

[buriedchild]

Title: Murinea
Author:

Comments

[quellefromage]

I like it. (but you're supposed to use the exact phrase in the story. go on, you can do it...)

fuckin' rats...

[buriedchild]

I know *hangs head in shame*

[kimonkey7]

No, no! No shame ever. Writing is writing, and that you've WRITTEN is the most important thing, and the whole dagburned purpose in the first place.

*baby smish*

Head held high, my dear.

*nods*

[kimonkey7]

HEY! I'M THE NAZI MOD. STFU, YOU!

*clouts you with a rasher of bacon*

*kisses your eyebrow*

[kimonkey7]

I LIKED it. Tell ol' cheesy to jump in a lake. ;)

I'm usually sort of a Nazi about the rules here, as you may have heard, but the rules themselves sort of offer up the 'whatever' option, so this is just fine. :)

I liked the mislead of the beginning, and then the fate more horrible than screaming ghouls. Nicely done.

I hope you'll play again. Thanks for sharing.

[buriedchild]

Ah shucks! See I LOVE rules, and i'll be sure to follow 'em better next time, yuppers :)

Thanks for the feedback.

[redrikki]

Dude, did Dean just get eaten by rats? That's far more creepy than ghosts. Not to mention gross.

[buriedchild]

Hahahahaha Rats are so gross!!

I don't think he got eaten. Mauled maybe, but not eaten :)

[brigid_tanner]

Ewww!!! nice bit of mis-direction there with me expecting some nasty supernatural kind of monster and getting rats. *shudder* I liked it!

[buriedchild]

haha, thanks for readin!! :) Your icon is very nice

[brigid_tanner]

It's a cool icon, and it works with your story ;) it was made by mata090680. Grab it if you want, just give her credit.