2nd Post

[hitmecosmo]

First roll of film ever

Plus

Some drawings I did in my first art class ever.

Constructive criticism welcome and encouraged.

Comments

[ohplanes]

I think the drawings are stronger then your photography actually, especially the last one, it's looking really great.

#3, #4 & #6.. something is too high in them, saturation I believe.
See it?
#3 on the girls arms and leg
#4 his face
#6 the light between the slats in the blind
You shouldn't be able to see that.

#2 would be awsome if it wasn't so tightly cropped.

[ultimateairn]

#6 is stunning.

[laurelbreakdown]

pointalism!