Oh my god you did such a great job of stretching out the tension there. Dead or Alive.... good god,, and all the searching and squabling on deck, and Holmes becoming "twin points of fire, lungs and mind"...so beautifully put. And the dangerous dance inside the box with the knives comeing in. The details of the water rising, how he slammed around inside, how the slosh of the box told him how far down he had sunk until there was no movement at all. The tiny gulp, and the greedy lungs trying to take more. Just marvelous. Great Great Great!
it was funny too cos i was reading i think later about it and they said people drowning often try to breathe in a little and inadvertently just keep trying which is woti had holmes do...lol yar
x3 thank you x3 i love lestrade in like erm all the roles and i rly liked clarkey as well, as little as he was in the first film (second too!) so i was pleased to be able to include him at all yar
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