TRSB #1 ... sort of finished

[bunn]

This story was about Tuor & Idril.  I hadn't written them before, and I'm really not convinced I've done a good job.  The story seems over-long and rather unwieldy, and it has a kind of wobbly saggy bit which I am really not sure how to fix.

But it has a beginning, a middle and an end.

Perhaps I can revise and trim it a bit later.  The second

Comments

[mrowe]

Looking forward to reading it!