NOOOO D: Well, I guess it was obvious that Derek was going to have at least a few werewolf things, but, awh, poor Nathalie, and come to think of it, poor Derek and Saga as well... Saga shouldn't listen to Bo, they're so cute together, but I can feel a breakup coming and I don't like it :'[ Allegra is badass, like, a lot.
Dereks werewolfishness was inevitable at this point. I chose to go down that path and now we can't get out! .. or can we? ;) I don't think Derek would ever let Saga slip out of his grip again, if he so has to lock her up in the basement! And yes, Allegra is so, so badass. And I love her. Like a lot :)
Holy hell! Here I am getting ready for work and I had to stop and read this. I mean... HOLY HELL!!! :o
Freak, this entire chapter was so exciting, that's all I could say! Derek! Nooo!
Oh and: "Saga had actually doubted he ever slept at all judging by the bags that was constantly dwelling under his eyes, and she wasn't sure we was sleeping now either. This was probably just another way of pissing her off."
<3 I really love these two. :D
LOL Edit again.. Jared and Beatrice!!! I sense true love. >_>
Haha, this was the best comment I've ever gotten on Pixel Peaks I think.
I just can't stop making Bo piss off Saga, I feel like it's the main core of my story ;) That and people leaving the scene without saying where they are going xD
And I just love throwing in premades just for laughs, but everytime I do I just want to see more of them, give them a solid part. I might have to take you up on that and make something out of Bee and Jared ;)
LOL I was so embarrassed after leaving the comment. I was kind of on my way out already and I know I rushed it. And I there was so much here that I was squeeing about I didn't want to leave anything out, hence all the edits. ;) It really was a great chapter, I loved all the action! And yes Jared <3! I never knew what to do with that guy (other than make him your typical stoner college hippy), but the personality you gave him is perfect.
This was a good chapter. I hope that Wren comes around and starts to appreciate Allegra after the attack. At least, the attack should give her a reason to.
The staging, the pictures, the action... just... everything was so well paced, too. You've always been good, but I feel like you've really hit another level with this one!
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Well, I guess it was obvious that Derek was going to have at least a few werewolf things, but, awh, poor Nathalie, and come to think of it, poor Derek and Saga as well...
Saga shouldn't listen to Bo, they're so cute together, but I can feel a breakup coming and I don't like it :'[
Allegra is badass, like, a lot.
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I don't think Derek would ever let Saga slip out of his grip again, if he so has to lock her up in the basement!
And yes, Allegra is so, so badass. And I love her. Like a lot :)
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Freak, this entire chapter was so exciting, that's all I could say! Derek! Nooo!
Oh and: "Saga had actually doubted he ever slept at all judging by the bags that was constantly dwelling under his eyes, and she wasn't sure we was sleeping now either. This was probably just another way of pissing her off."
<3 I really love these two. :D
LOL Edit again.. Jared and Beatrice!!! I sense true love. >_>
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I just can't stop making Bo piss off Saga, I feel like it's the main core of my story ;) That and people leaving the scene without saying where they are going xD
And I just love throwing in premades just for laughs, but everytime I do I just want to see more of them, give them a solid part. I might have to take you up on that and make something out of Bee and Jared ;)
Thank you so much for always commenting :D
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This was a good chapter. I hope that Wren comes around and starts to appreciate Allegra after the attack. At least, the attack should give her a reason to.
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Thank you for reading :)
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HOLY CRAP.
I DON'T EVEN.
The staging, the pictures, the action... just... everything was so well paced, too. You've always been good, but I feel like you've really hit another level with this one!
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Thank you so much for reading, it means a great deal to me!
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