FFVII fic, Zack/Cloud

Sep 06, 2008 02:13

Title: Sane?
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII
Pairing: Zack/Cloud
Word Count: 295
Rating: R-ish

Sane? )

zack/cloud, zack, cloud, ffvii

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mirukail September 6 2008, 02:28:41 UTC
That last line was very powerful: "There was no better way to be close to him than to be him." It's so true, isn't it? The more insane you are, the more freedom you get in your own mind/memories and the farther you get to be away from everyone else.

I loved how you conveyed Cloud's mixed feelings. He's sad to let down Tifa but he doesn't want to give up on a memory. Even though it's only a drabblish-fic, it really spoke to me. I hope you post more.

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bumble_ant September 6 2008, 14:05:18 UTC
Thanks for your comment! XD

I always thought it was interesting that Cloud was out of it for such a big part of the game. Who isn't too say he felt better then?

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reddorozette September 6 2008, 05:49:31 UTC
Wow, that last one was really good line. *shivers* Nuah, welling up, this is short but really beautifully written.

Thank you! :)

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reddorozette September 6 2008, 05:50:01 UTC
I'm repeating myself, sorry.
"Last line was a good line I mean wtf?"

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bumble_ant September 6 2008, 14:05:43 UTC
You're welcome... and you thanks for commenting!

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sairento_hiru September 6 2008, 08:11:34 UTC
Awesome wibbleness

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bumble_ant September 6 2008, 14:07:06 UTC
Thanks

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bumble_ant September 6 2008, 23:31:47 UTC
Thanks!

And your icon is just omgsocute XD

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