Look, I Can Flutter Better Than You Thought (5/?)

[intoxicatedbrat]

Title: Look, I Can Flutter Better Than You Thought (5/?)
Length: 1798 words
Rating: PG-13 (Sadistic themes)
Genre: Horror / Supernatural.
Pairing: Onew / Jonghyun (OnHyun)
Warning: Not for the faint-hearted?
Disclaimer: SHINee doesn’t belong to me. Original idea belonged to Tecmo, I just adapted it and added in a few ideas of my own.
Summary: The SHINee

Comments

[xxqod]

ZOMG spot >.

[xxqod]

OMG.
THIS.
Jonghyun actually attacking the wrong spirit/ghost T.T
gawds boy.

But that album seriously scared me and Jonghyun having dreams of his previous life. T.T
And Jinki voicing out what going on, without knowing Jonghyun's dreams in detail, gawds. It's really scary in a sense.

For a spirit Ibuki can speak a lot of languages XD lol.

:)
<3 ~~

[intoxicatedbrat]

omg you're always super fast!

yeaa. in my mind, Jinki's smart, and he knows what's going on. just that he refused to acknowledge it. likewise for Jonghyun.

Ahh. that will be explained soon-ish. X)

thank you for reading!

[baby_buggs]

O.o

HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

spirit Ibuki soeaks a lot of languages...i really don't want them to die...whats really going on....AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(and i am sitting here reading this and spazzing when i should be doing homework hehe^^)

[intoxicatedbrat]

OMG DON'T FREAK OUT. AHAHAHA!! XD

regarding that... lol. it will soon be explained. (serves me right for creating language barriers in the first place. had to find a way out. >.<)

thanks for reading! :D

(ok now go do homework!!)

[intoxicatedbrat]

ahhh you are too nice~!! *cries*

i'm glad i'm able to get you hooked! i had no idea what i got myself into, writing horror/supernatural. it was so hard to make things scary.. T.T

ahahah yeaa i try my best to potray the boys' characters. but i have no idea what they'll be like under stress. so writing Onew and Jonghyun here is hard.

thank you for reading and your lovely comments! ^^

[koalaspice]

/came on over from Replay!

1. I'm gonna say I friggin LOVE you for this. Fatal Frame II is my FAVOURITE Xbox game; and I dig the series like nothing else.
2. This is just gorgeously written ;3; I'm only on part 3, but so catching up. ♥ I friggin love how true you were to the story ;~;

[intoxicatedbrat]

ahhh thank you thank you! for reading, commenting and the compliment! ^^

EEEP a Fatal Frame fan! >.< Hello! I love Fatal Frame II too!
it has such an amazing plot, i just want to retell it to everyone! but omg, it's harder than i thought. T.T
i hope i'm doing FFII justice, and not totally murdering it.

but whatever it is, it's kinda impossible to bring out the true Fatal Frame atmosphere. i mean. ugh. i freaked out too many times playing the game.

[koalaspice]

late comment might be late. ;~; but I'm all caught up now kekeke <3 and waiting the 6th eagerly!

It is so hard, oh gosh x_____x;;; But you did such a fabulous job of it! I was actually playing it earlier and I was like "JINKI GET BACK HERE...wait...Mayu...I meant Mayu...", hahaha. I can actually see it, too; in my head

ngl i freak out playing that game so much x_____x I have to do some form of (horribly unfunny) audio commentary along with it or mimic whatever. Truthfully I still haven't gotten 100% ;~;

[intoxicatedbrat]

a comment is still a comment! :D

hurrhurr frankly, i can picture Jinki wandering off chasing a butterfly~ :p

O.O does that work?? i kept the volume as low as possible. and i pause the game alot. walk around, grab a snack or something. let my trembling hands calm down first. 8D but dammit, if you pause the game too long, they made something appear on the screen. geez the game doesn't give you a break, does it??

haha i didn't finish the game. i read spoilers online instead. >.

[crash_nitro]

I love this story
I look forward to following :)

[intoxicatedbrat]

thank you so much~~
<3