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FIC: Eleven Hours ~ Chapter Nine

Nov 07, 2012 18:59

Title: Eleven Hours ~ Chapter Nine
Author: bugs
Genre: Suspense, Drama, Romance
Rating: T+
Word Count: 2,800
Timeline: 20 hours, 20 minutes

( The dying leader shall shatter into a thousand stars, leading our way to humanity's new home. Take your piece, and hold it close. It is your entrance to paradise. )

romance, suspense, a/r fics, wip, drama, t+

Comments 11

akachankami November 8 2012, 05:50:48 UTC

=D you called the theater ship 'la fenice'!!!!!! *flails* XD

oh, loved laura's fantasy/memories ♥ so vivid, so real ♥ and also really scary =( *shudders*

perfect angry bill is so scary!!! D:
i love him ♥

i always thought it was kinda odd six is allowed those clothes in the brig... O.o all men are pervs? XD

bugsfic November 11 2012, 09:59:07 UTC

Of course it must be an Italian opera house! Much drama will happen there!

oh, loved laura's fantasy/memories ♥ so vivid, so real ♥ and also really scary =( *shudders*

Yes, it's all getting pretty intense here!

perfect angry bill is so scary!!! D:
i love him ♥

I know. It's my secret sinful love.

i always thought it was kinda odd six is allowed those clothes in the brig... O.o all men are pervs? XD

Uh, I think we know the answer to that. :D

Gosh, when they put Sharon in the brig, she got a pair of sweats!

mellow_mel November 8 2012, 13:09:59 UTC

:-)

bugsfic November 11 2012, 09:59:52 UTC

Hah! You smile now...Just wait!

mellow_mel November 11 2012, 13:15:25 UTC

Hmm? I must have been in a big rush!
This chapter should not have been a smiley face!

:,( so sad! Poor Laura/ poor Laura's HAIR!!!!

anonymous November 8 2012, 18:22:19 UTC

Noooo, curse you, Dodona, for cutting Laura's pretty hair! :( At least we're on the right track again :P The theater ship = opera house was a nice touch :)

Roni

bugsfic November 11 2012, 10:06:57 UTC

Noooo, curse you, Dodona, for cutting Laura's pretty hair!

I just found it so odd that poor Laura went from losing a bit of hair but still having a full head, to a wig in one episode! Had to use that in a fic...

The theater ship = opera house was a nice touch

Gods help me for trying to find some logic in that storyline, but I will!

lydgate71 November 8 2012, 19:08:18 UTC

Oh no, poor Laura! Scary mad Bill might be my favorite thing ever though. What is going to happen?!

bugsfic November 11 2012, 10:10:39 UTC

Scary mad Bill might be my favorite thing ever though.

Totally. Because he's not coming for us!

What is going to happen?!

I'm not going to tell. :D

bsg_aussiegirl November 9 2012, 04:10:44 UTC

BTW, forgot to tell you, I really really love touchy feely Bill. And Laura gradually admitting that she wants to touch him back. *happy shippy sigh*

bugsfic November 11 2012, 10:12:06 UTC

Yes, I had to toss us a bone in all the angst! Some touching at least!