FIC: Eleven Hours ~ Chapter Two

[bugsfic]

Title: Eleven Hours
Author: bugs
Genre: Suspense, Drama, Romance
Rating: T
Word Count: 5,500
Timestamp: Twelve hours, twenty-three minutes
A/N: bsg_aussiegirl continues to toil away in the trenches of betadom. (How do I spell Baltar's name again?) With my Grumpy Old Uncle visiting again, my fandome time has been limited and wary, seeing how he's a nosy dude. *

Comments

[marzipanilla]

!?!!!?

Ya.

Ha, they are gunna go 'what?' when they hear about how that bullet got through the picture.

I love the set up of their investigation. The observations are great, but at the same time I feel incredibly upset about the invasion of Bill and Laura's personal space.

[bugsfic]

Ha, they are gunna go 'what?' when they hear about how that bullet got through the picture.

Ain't that the truth. Is there any way to make that sound sane? Here's your president trying to pop a cap on your star returned from the dead pilot...

The observations are great, but at the same time I feel incredibly upset about the invasion of Bill and Laura's personal space.

Truly, the whole idea of the fic was to snoop into the A/R domestic life, but I agree, it's also something very hard to watch. I guess we may be too invested in the characters?

[mellow_mel]

Argh! So many misunderstood clues!!!
:) looking forward to reading more!

[bugsfic]

Argh! So many misunderstood clues!!!

That's the fun part! Think how many bits of your own life wouldn't stand up to scrutiny!

[anonymous]

Ha, I bet they found Cally :D :D But I can't figure out how :D

OMG, all the details! This is simply amazing and it hits me in all the right spots! I can't wait to see more interrogating :) I really loved this chapter!

Roni

[bugsfic]

OMG, all the details! This is simply amazing and it hits me in all the right spots! I can't wait to see more interrogating :)

I just love putting a microscope up to the ship! Just really look at their world through that lens.

[afrakaday]

I love how defensive Bill is. He's trying to be helpful and has every reason to be falling apart, but the questioning and searching's so uncomfortable for him.

At first I was all like, "Yeah, Han ships it!" so I'm glad you brought it back around to that in-rack visualization at the end. Han clearly hasn't been reading the Fleet Porn that would teach her about details such as always using protection when one's partner is on diloxin.

Awesome chapter and what an evil cliffie of an ending.

[bugsfic]

I love how defensive Bill is. He's trying to be helpful and has every reason to be falling apart, but the questioning and searching's so uncomfortable for him.

One of the things that struck me is how protected and sheltered they are on Galactica (Until the mutiny, of course) and to peel that back to reveal their life to the rest of the Fleet intrigued me.

At first I was all like, "Yeah, Han ships it!" so I'm glad you brought it back around to that in-rack visualization at the end. Han clearly hasn't been reading the Fleet Porn that would teach her about details such as always using protection when one's partner is on diloxin.

It's so easy to have the OC's ship the couple too, but I want Han to be suspicious of the whole set up. 'cause admit it, it's pretty shady!

*snort* at the RPF Fleet Porn! How Meta!

[newnumbertwo]

Oh no! Who's dead? Cally?

More, please.

[bugsfic]

I'm not going to tell!

I need to get rid of my Grumpy Old Uncle first, then I can write in peace!