FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter 37

May 06, 2012 23:38

Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Thirty-seven
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: T+
Word Count: 3,100

The storm came, a barrage of wind, rain, and electricity under our skin. )

birthday fics, au, romance, a/r fics, drama, t+, nunfic

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akachankami May 7 2012, 08:22:46 UTC
-,- LJ ate my comment!!! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
it went something like: *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* last #nunfic chapter NOT being the last on my screen =D YES YES! MORE!!! XD

never expected kat to be there XD go kat! and i loved the disney villain description of cavil reappearance =D John Cavil was nothing more than a voice and the glint of the whites of his eyes *shudders*

you had me there for a moment i thought you'd killed elosha ç_ç so i cursed loudly =P LOL XD

and then i was all happy about faith ending *-* squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee XD ♥ #nunfic is so canon XD
does it really have to end? ç_ç next we have #waldolaura, i'm quite sure there won't be happy times for awhile ç_ç (but i'm so curious about it all the same =D killer angst and all)
squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *hugs #evilevilauthor*

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bugsfic May 8 2012, 05:28:24 UTC
I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS!

The story wasn't about the plot so much as it was about Laura and Bill's journey, so it feels right to that give resolution its own ending.

never expected kat to be there XD go kat!

LOL! I had to fit her in!

you had me there for a moment i thought you'd killed elosha ç_ç so i cursed loudly

I realized that the readers would probably think that, and felt sorta bad for a second. *shifting evilauthor eyes*

and then i was all happy about faith ending

Yep, I had to use it!

does it really have to end? ç_ç next we have #waldolaura, i'm quite sure there won't be happy times for awhile ç_ç (but i'm so curious about it all the same =D killer angst and all)

Choices, choices!

Shifting away nervously from the hugging!

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marzipanilla May 7 2012, 08:27:04 UTC
Laura taking the bandage off Baltar.

I admit, I cheer ridiculously whenever I see her do it, because fuck you Baltar- I want you to suffer for what you refuse to take responsibility for; even though, emotionally/spiritually it may have screwed Laura over in the long run. I believe you can kill and be capable of love though, so it kinda pisses me off that The Hub kinda implies otherwise. Plus, the fact that all of humanities morality gets laid down on her- fuck, can't the woman make a single decision without it having to relate to someone else? /end rant

I seriously thought you were about to kill Elosha there.

Ya for a measure of piece at the end!

Fluffy coda? Does that mean smutty fluffy coda? :D

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bugsfic May 8 2012, 05:34:48 UTC
Oh, I always take a moment to yell, Bleed out like a pig! every time, but it never happens. :(

I seriously thought you were about to kill Elosha there.

After killing Billy, I just couldn't!

Fluffy coda? Does that mean smutty fluffy coda?

You all have one track minds!

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bsgroxmysox May 7 2012, 08:43:09 UTC
Oh Hero!Bill is so lovely! I am super glad Elosha is alive :-D
When Baltar said he had the other souls including Laura's I swear I nearly screamed at the screen! Leave my Laura alone!! But big explosion has taken care of this YAY!!

I did love this chapter as an end to the drama but we definitely need some happytimes ending/epilogue. Oh I can't believe this is coming to an end! Nun!fic should never end!!!

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bugsfic May 8 2012, 05:38:55 UTC
Yes, I do love giving Bill the chance to be the swashbuckler!

When Baltar said he had the other souls including Laura's I swear I nearly screamed at the screen! Leave my Laura alone!! But big explosion has taken care of this YAY!!

I realized I'd written myself into a corner there, so just planted another bomb! I can be as evil as Cavil!

There's definitely a need for some emotional resolution, though, after the smoke cleared.

Nun!fic should never end!!!

*head, desk*

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bsg_aussiegirl May 7 2012, 10:05:32 UTC
Woo-hoo! Bill saves the day!

Love all the canon. Kat is very funny. Oath kiss is great. Baltar being injured and bleeding out is always appreciated (that must have nearly killed you, letting him live).

I didn't think you'd let Elosha die like that. Laura might have never come back from that!

I loved her and Laura's spunk in this chapter. No shrinking violets letting their man save them, those two!

Your end notes are hilarious. You crowd pleaser, you. :)

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bugsfic May 8 2012, 05:50:51 UTC
Baltar being injured and bleeding out is always appreciated (that must have nearly killed you, letting him live).

Oh, you know it. Hard not to flip that bit of canon! Oddly, it'd feel wrong to kill the bastard though. His cockroachness is so inherent!

I didn't think you'd let Elosha die like that. Laura might have never come back from that!

No, I didn't think she could. It never even occurred to me to kill Elosha because of that. I wanted to scare everyone though!

I loved her and Laura's spunk in this chapter. No shrinking violets letting their man save them, those two!

Oh good; I'm glad it came off that way. I couldn't think of a way to switch the mood to a BOTS's sort of moment for Laura. Poor Sister Laura still hasn't gone through what Madam Prez had.

Your end notes are hilarious. You crowd pleaser, you. :)

I am a whore, aren't I? But I'm one who enjoys the work. :D

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mellow_mel May 7 2012, 11:08:28 UTC
What a nice morning surprise to start the day!

Yes, We will take coda please with a side of smut!

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bugsfic May 8 2012, 05:52:02 UTC
We can count on Mel to keep her eyes on the prize! LOL!

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mellow_mel May 8 2012, 11:25:41 UTC
I wrote that comment BEFORE reading domestic!fic
Now I feel like I've over eaten on thanksgiving!
Hopefully it will take you a while to write it... Lol

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