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FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter 35

Apr 07, 2012 21:49

Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Thirty-five
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: T
Word Count: 2,400

( If I were to say the words, my boy is dead, it will be final, so I don't. I run, I hide, I sleep like I am dead myself. )

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anonymous April 8 2012, 08:09:58 UTC

YAAAAAAAAAAY SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE FLAAAAAAAAAAIL THE HUB!!!!!!! BEST CHAPTER EVEEEEEER!!!!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Roni

bugsfic April 8 2012, 19:21:27 UTC

I think you say that every time! :D But I appreciate it.

defyingnormalcy April 8 2012, 14:31:34 UTC

I'm getting ready for feast # 2 today - so I must make my comment short and sweet. :P

I love that you explored The Hub near death scene as it was originally written - with Billy as Laura's "spirit guide."

Not going to lie, I melted when Laura finally said The Words.

Also, Lee being there to help his Dad and his GF is so adorable. Yay! Lee's starting to redeem himself!

Okay...back to eating now. :D :P

bugsfic April 8 2012, 19:23:28 UTC

I've always been intrigued by that idea of Billy, so I wanted to take it out for a spin.

It's also fun to find ways to do the I love you for Laura. But it gets me every time too!

Also, Lee being there to help his Dad and his GF is so adorable. Yay! Lee's starting to redeem himself!

You have so much faith in Lee! So cute to see...

defyingnormalcy April 8 2012, 21:25:45 UTC

You have so much faith in Lee! So cute to see...

I am hoping (perhaps foolishly) that he redeems himself here like he redeems himself after the mutiny arch.

hollywobbles April 8 2012, 16:38:38 UTC

Yaayyyy!!!!!! ♥

bugsfic April 8 2012, 19:24:18 UTC

Simple and to the point, but it does feel as though I've 'gotten somewhere'!

nixmom April 8 2012, 17:02:46 UTC

Billy delivering swift kick to the ass was nice. Still not sure that Elosha wasn't a better choice in the show, but this worked really well for me. The harshness of some of the moments is much more jarring coming from sweet Billy-boy.

And of course who doesn't love a good about time moment. Obviously it pleased Bill.

Why does Lee promising not to let his Dad down fill me with dread?

bugsfic April 8 2012, 19:31:40 UTC

Billy delivering swift kick to the ass was nice. Still not sure that Elosha wasn't a better choice in the show, but this worked really well for me. The harshness of some of the moments is much more jarring coming from sweet Billy-boy.

I can't believe JE when she says that the dialogue was exactly as it was written if Billy had played in the episode. As I transcribed, I just couldn't see Billy saying it. Perhaps if BC had been in the role, they would have had to change the dialogue. I finally just had to have Laura note how out of character it was and how he was her subconscious, which Hub!Laura says as well, so I guess that's what they were going for.

Why does Lee promising not to let his Dad down fill me with dread?

Because you're basing future performance on past results, always a smart move.

lindy999 April 8 2012, 17:38:23 UTC

Um this was great but I think I missed a chapter. Where is chapter 34??

hollywobbles April 8 2012, 17:44:57 UTC

It was posted! Just click "previous entry" at the top of the page. :)

lindy999 April 8 2012, 18:11:46 UTC

Thanks. For some reason I can't see it from my phone app. Guess I'm turning on the computer.

bugsfic April 8 2012, 18:51:47 UTC

I screwed up with numbering the chapters last time and had Chapter 34 as 35, so I may have caused your phone great confusion. (Wait, I did fix that, didn't I?)

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