I'll always forgive you for being MIA for so long if this is what we get afterwards.
Even if I was too wiped out to write, I could still think through scenes...And think...
OMFG Baltar and Cavil.... I sense trouble!
Good call. :D
Oh, and Laura picking out a set of lingerie for her "boy?"
I may have to show that scene at some point. Poor Laura, unable to make choices while shopping, just grabbing red because she knows Bill likes that at least!
Bill, why are you constantly bringing up the possibility of Laura sleeping with other men!?!?! For the love of all that is right in this world please do not be foreshadowing anything ...
Bill, why are you constantly bringing up the possibility of Laura sleeping with other men!?!?!
Don't you do that? Say it enough times, so if it does really happen, it doesn't hurt as much. Laura's not giving him any commitment, no "I love you," so I think he's always going to be a bit wary.
Ooh, the return of the rose petals and Bill forgot all about them in their mutual eagerness! So cute and funny. Oh and everything else? HOT. "Damn it, woman, I'm gonna fuck you straight through this couch," he promised. *is speechless* *but rallies to high-five Bill*
I didn't have an ending, other than collapsing in a puddle of sweat, and then I thought of the rose petals! Seemed like a cute little silly Bill moment. :D
you #evilevilauthor preventing me from sleeping with another chapter! a frakking hot chapter! OMGs... the dreams i'm gonna have now XD
the urgency of their lovemaking was understandable but somehow you made it funny XD i love that she burns bright red when they get caught in the car XD that's so cute! ♥ and i love that she started it in the first place! XD
zarek, cavil, baltar... i'm sure you have an #evilplan but at least they're not cockblocking for now! =D i love you for that!!! XD
BBE bill would make a rose bed cover for her to come home to... then forget about it and supply to her most urgent necessities without complaining =P *happy shippy sigh* ♥
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Holy frak. I forgive you. I'll always forgive you for being MIA for so long if this is what we get afterwards. Holy frak.
Because I feel like I need to comment on something other than the sex, OMFG Baltar and Cavil.... I sense trouble!
And back to the sex...
OMFG
Oh, and Laura picking out a set of lingerie for her "boy?" Holy frak.
Also, I hope that you are feeling better! *hands you hot tea and some tissues* :)
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Even if I was too wiped out to write, I could still think through scenes...And think...
OMFG Baltar and Cavil.... I sense trouble!
Good call. :D
Oh, and Laura picking out a set of lingerie for her "boy?"
I may have to show that scene at some point. Poor Laura, unable to make choices while shopping, just grabbing red because she knows Bill likes that at least!
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Yes, yes you do.
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Bill, why are you constantly bringing up the possibility of Laura sleeping with other men!?!?! For the love of all that is right in this world please do not be foreshadowing anything ...
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Don't you do that? Say it enough times, so if it does really happen, it doesn't hurt as much. Laura's not giving him any commitment, no "I love you," so I think he's always going to be a bit wary.
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I was totally waiting for them to crash the car though -laugh- Glad they didn't.
Ooh, what's Zarek's next move going to be?
(ergh! Colds are evil, aren't they? Sorry you had to suffer through two -hug-)
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I was able to create dramatic tension! With smut!
Ooh, what's Zarek's next move going to be?
More dramatic tension!
Don't hug the diseased!
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"Damn it, woman, I'm gonna fuck you straight through this couch," he promised.
*is speechless* *but rallies to high-five Bill*
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*is speechless* *but rallies to high-five Bill*
Bill accepts your slap!
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the urgency of their lovemaking was understandable but somehow you made it funny XD i love that she burns bright red when they get caught in the car XD that's so cute! ♥ and i love that she started it in the first place! XD
zarek, cavil, baltar... i'm sure you have an #evilplan but at least they're not cockblocking for now! =D i love you for that!!! XD
BBE bill would make a rose bed cover for her to come home to... then forget about it and supply to her most urgent necessities without complaining =P *happy shippy sigh* ♥
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i love that she burns bright red when they get caught in the car XD that's so cute! ♥ and i love that she started it in the first place!
That seemed very Laura! Cause a mess and then put it off on Bill!
zarek, cavil, baltar... i'm sure you have an #evilplan but at least they're not cockblocking for now!
Yes, take what small victories you can!
BBE bill would make a rose bed cover for her to come home to... then forget about it and supply to her most urgent necessities without complaining
I think he's the BBE because he doesn't get bogged down on his big plan and reads his woman's needs!
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