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FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty-six

Jan 01, 2012 19:22

Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty-six
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: MA
Word Count: 2,400

( She prayed like the rest of us ask about the weather. It was mundane, every day, but necessary. I think someone answered her prayers, but like the weather, wasn't always what she expected. )

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Comments 25

defyingnormalcy January 2 2012, 04:39:34 UTC

For the first time since posting nunfic you have rendered me speechless.I honestly cannot formulate a coherent thought right now.

Holy. Frak. ---> :O (my face)

*is a pile of mush*

bugsfic January 2 2012, 04:59:57 UTC

For the first time since posting nunfic you have rendered me speechless.

Good gods! Seriously, I'm not surprised. I've been In a Mood all weekend, and it came out in the chapter. Wasn't really sure how that'd go over!

defyingnormalcy January 2 2012, 05:31:48 UTC

Am still speechless.

Need to read a few more times. Mmmmm.... :P

akachankami January 2 2012, 05:01:49 UTC

way to start 2012 with a bang! XD YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! #nunfic!!!!!!!!!!
thank you bugs! thank you!!!! ♥

i don't know where to start... didn't expect their night to end so soon but then you made up with more secksing in the same chapter yay! XD

bill is the ultimate BBE. damn, i want one! good chef, writer, good in bed, smart, sweet, sassy and finding excuses to buy you presents! ♥ i want one too!!! ♥

what happened to bill in the church?

this chapter ending is somehow nostalgic... *shippy sigh* i loved it ♥

bugsfic January 2 2012, 07:15:11 UTC

I knew I had to get the chapter done today, or the Teddy would be whining at me!

didn't expect their night to end so soon but then you made up with more secksing in the same chapter yay! XD

Poor Bill! He's an old man!

bill is the ultimate BBE. damn, i want one! good chef, writer, good in bed, smart, sweet, sassy and finding excuses to buy you presents!

Remember, I am the #evilauthor. Careful what you praise!

what happened to bill in the church?Which part? LOL! I think he's still concerned about her connection to the religious life. He thinks he can't change, doesn't want to ask her to change, so where does that leave them ( ... )

akachankami January 2 2012, 13:28:13 UTC

Remember, I am the #evilauthor. Careful what you praise!
good thing you aknowledge your #evilauthorness... well now i'm concerned O.o what will #evilevilauthor do with my OTP??? D:

If you mean his reaction to Father Serra's grave, he's a controversial figure in California.
yes i'm totally ignorant on that matter, sorry. now i know =P thank you ♥

bugsfic January 2 2012, 19:22:31 UTC

I don't like when characters stop in a scene to explain something they would both fully know just so the reader/watcher know what's going on. LOL! It's a detail that's not important to the plot. As long as you got conflict, that's enough. :D

And I'm whistling innocently to the other bit.

miabicicletta January 2 2012, 05:12:43 UTC

This series continues to be hot, sexy and awesome at every new chapter you post. I absolutely adore it and can't wait for the next chapter.

You rock, lady!

bugsfic January 2 2012, 07:21:59 UTC

Everyone wants a new chapter! The pressure! The pressure!

(Okay, I'll admit it. I want to see the next chapter too, so I guess I better write it.)

b_devyn January 2 2012, 05:55:23 UTC

JESUS. What a way to start 2012. Reading the most erotic, sensual sexy times is probably the best way to start the new year.

I'm really excited to see where this story goes and I hope you continue it...for a long long time. I don't think I could EVER get tired of reading stories about my favorite OTP.

Its rather hot in here, or is that just me? :) Must go reread...

bugsfic January 2 2012, 07:31:55 UTC

I'm glad the scenes worked out. Sometimes I like to start in the middle, so to speak, but that can feel like I'm cheating the readers!

I'm really excited to see where this story goes and I hope you continue it...for a long long time. I don't think I could EVER get tired of reading stories about my favorite OTP.

It sure doesn't feel like it's going to end any time soon! It's great to hear readers still enthusiastic about the ship. I certainly feel like there's plenty of stories left to write.

afrakaday January 2 2012, 06:06:37 UTC

Lovely sexy chapter. I adore that butterfly scarf from the Hub, nice to see it appear here.
Really interesting to see how far Laura has come in losing inhibitions. Way to go, kids. *Applauds Bill and Laura's marathon secksings*

bugsfic January 2 2012, 07:36:27 UTC

I adore that butterfly scarf from the Hub, nice to see it appear here.

I thought it was too good of a touch to let pass by. Monterey is known for the migration of Monarch butterflies.

Really interesting to see how far Laura has come in losing inhibitions. Way to go, kids.

LOL! Yes, but these are just one set of inhibitions. Laura's got a way to go with others.