FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty
Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Twenty
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: MA
Word Count: 4,700
( When the first rains came to California, the earth opened, absorbing all the water it could, but it overflowed quickly, gurgling in the drains and running in sheets down the streets. There was a smell, of damp loam and washed leaves, that had been gone for ages. Now it rose from the wet soil, coiling like smoke, to meet my senses. The first rain was always my release, cleansing my city and making it new. I raised my face to the deluge and was cleaned as well. )
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: MA
Word Count: 4,700
( When the first rains came to California, the earth opened, absorbing all the water it could, but it overflowed quickly, gurgling in the drains and running in sheets down the streets. There was a smell, of damp loam and washed leaves, that had been gone for ages. Now it rose from the wet soil, coiling like smoke, to meet my senses. The first rain was always my release, cleansing my city and making it new. I raised my face to the deluge and was cleaned as well. )
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"I don't recall asking you for forgiveness," he grumbled, even as his hands were back on her bare skin, rubbing over her goose pimpled flesh.
"You have it anyway," she said in that end of conversation tone.
LOVE this. She forgives him so easily. Me likey!!!!
He snatched up the box, tearing at the damn sealed top.
Suddenly he stopped. "When'd you get these? Before or after our fight?"
YES. THE CONDOMS MAKE AN APPEARANCE!!!!
"Oh God, Laura," was what he said aloud, but she still heard the "I love you," he barely whispered into her ear as he shuddered and bucked over her.
OMG OMG OMG HE SAID 'I LOVE YOU' OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!
"I don't want another woman." Now his growl was impatient. "I've had those other women. I want you. It's not the particular act, or what we do. It's the feelings--I've told you that."
SQUEEEEEEE
"I love your bowed legs."
JFC I am a pile of mush with this chapter. I LOVE IT.
She kissed the red spot on his bottom, as ( ... )
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YES. THE CONDOMS MAKE AN APPEARANCE!!!!
OMG, you guys have been panting with excitement about that box of condoms. *shaking head*
What a beautiful way to end this chapter. ♥
Oh, I'm glad that worked. I wasn't sure if it'd feel innocuous after the sexy times. This time, Laura's prayers felt like the right thing to do.
I don't care that you dislike hugs. I am sending you internet hugs anyway. Because I adored this chapter far too much! :D :P
AAAEEEIIII!!! *running away as fast as my six legs can carry me*
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*snort* I can't say I EVER thought I'd get so dam excited over a box of condoms. This is what nunfic does to me... and the best part? THERE IS STILL A WHOLE BOX!!!!!! *shakes head in disbelief*
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Fanfic does make us do crazy things.
THERE IS STILL A WHOLE BOX!!!!!!
In the shoebox where I keep Fic!Bill under my bed, he squares his shoulders. He's ready to accept this assignment, be it ever so intimidating.
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Ok I love this in so many many ways. But beyond the greatness of their secksing, his falling out of bed was my favorite part.
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Poor Bill! We love to see his more vulnerable side. :D
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Chekov's phone call! They're all important!
Of course, now that Bill isn't there to snuggle with her I hope she doesn't over analyze what happened.. Twas a good thing Laura, no second guessing yourself!
Oh god, that group at the hospital? Laura would belt someone, probably for being a dick to Bill. Then chastizing them by reminding them they should be there for Kara..
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She's the spiritual leader in all universes. :D
Of course, now that Bill isn't there to snuggle with her I hope she doesn't over analyze what happened.. Twas a good thing Laura, no second guessing yourself!
Hmmm...she does have something to think about. Time for her to move into 33 mode and start making some snap decisions.
Oh god, that group at the hospital? Laura would belt someone, probably for being a dick to Bill.
Ah, Bill doesn't know her well enough yet. She'd never belt someone herself, or she'd immediately apologize, but she'd get security to toss them out the airlock front doors.
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Lovely smut. Tried hard not to blush whilst reading. But really, it was GUH.
The Cosmo reading. LOL! You keep plagiarising yourself! First, woodcut prints, then Shunga, now Cosmo!
I love them sharing glasses btw. I don't think I've ever really read that before. It's so cute.
She wanted to berate him, "Don't be an idiot!" but she contained herself.
"Of course, Bill," she said coolly, Don't know why, but I love that bit. Just berate him! He loves it.
This had to be pure, unadulterated sin, and she was utterly unrepentant. You go, girl!
And they never clashed heads or bumped noses, so of course Bill had to fall out of the bed! Naked, bow-legged, the condom stuck on his flaccid penis, he looked utterly ridiculous and she adored him. Oh, that is adorable.
She has to move in with him. It makes perfect sense!
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With the kids right there. *tsk, tsk*
The Cosmo reading. LOL! You keep plagiarising yourself! First, woodcut prints, then Shunga, now Cosmo!
They're readers, aren't they!?
I love them sharing glasses btw. I don't think I've ever really read that before. It's so cute.
Now that I did plag from Something's Gotta Give, more old people sexy times.
Don't know why, but I love that bit. Just berate him! He loves it.
Heh. She should have noticed the twitching in his boxers when she was ordering him around.
And they never clashed heads or bumped noses, so of course Bill had to fall out of the bed!
Which I plagged from adams_verse. I'm on a roll!
She has to move in with him. It makes perfect sense!
Just keep whining. Maybe Mummy will give you what you want. I'm sure it works with you.
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