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FIC: Turn the Page ~ Chapter Thirteen

Oct 15, 2011 13:06

Title: Turn the Page ~ Chapter 13
Author: bugs
Genre: AU, Romance, Drama
Rating: MA
Word Count: 5,200

A/N: My apologizes. I must have known last weekend that the week ahead would be a slam and thus I got so many chapters out. Unfortunately, that left you and worse, poor Bill and Laura, hanging. But with some hounding encouragement from certain ( Read more... )

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Comments 43

bsg_aussiegirl October 15 2011, 22:09:21 UTC

This seems very inappropriate breaky reading. *snort*

I'll have to read again later and leave a more coherent review, but you know me well enough to know I'm obsessing with one particular part...

bugsfic October 16 2011, 01:04:13 UTC

DO NOT GET CAUGHT.

Gosh, there's so many particular parts that I think could push your buttons, I'm truly not sure...

defyingnormalcy October 15 2011, 22:12:55 UTC

MA RATING OMFG

*runs to read*

bugsfic October 16 2011, 01:04:47 UTC

*snort*

Doesn't take much to get the hounds barking!

lacklusterfic October 15 2011, 22:14:56 UTC

Want to leave a comment. But rendered temporarily speechless!

bugsfic October 16 2011, 01:19:17 UTC

I'll take that in a good way. :D

defyingnormalcy October 15 2011, 22:24:33 UTC

"You're in my blood, like cheap wine. Bitter and sweet, tinged with regret."

Rather than being offended by the less than flattering description, Laura nodded. Her hand ran slowly up and down his forearm as she felt herself falling asleep one final time. "You need to write that down; it's good," she said drowsily.

O.M.F.G. THIS.

I can't offer much coherency to be honest, other than, LOVED this. The entire chapter was so lovely and honest and just PERFECT. <3

bugsfic October 16 2011, 01:20:27 UTC

Thank you! I was a bit worried because I couldn't find a big block of time to work on it during the week, but I felt like I knew what I wanted to write. But it's still nervewracking to write quickly and post. Did I forget something?

defyingnormalcy October 16 2011, 05:28:46 UTC

Did I forget something?
Nope, I feel like this was perfect as their first sexual encounter. I 'awwww'd' out loud at Bill's sweetness and BBEness. :D

akachankami October 15 2011, 22:39:33 UTC

XD i'm still reading but this has to be marked before i go further: Her irritation was back. She didn't want any doubts from him; someone had to know what they were doing tonight and it would have to be him for this particular situation.
i laughed out loud and almost fell on the floor XD

bugsfic October 16 2011, 01:21:31 UTC

I hope to start bringing Politician Laura into the character more and more. The 'just do it!' sort! :D