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To Make Us Clean - January 2008 Challenge

Jan 09, 2008 23:44

Title: To Make Us Clean
Author: Ava
Status: Complete
Rating: FR18
Pairing: Buffy/Dean/Jo
Summary: There is something inherently beautiful about all scars of whatever nature. A scar means that the hurt is over, the wound is closed and healed. Done with-unless that scar runs deeper than the eye.
Challenge: January 2008 Challenge @
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user: ava, fanfiction, length: short story, rating: r

Comments 3

exposed1 January 10 2008, 21:07:51 UTC

Holy crap, I was not expecting that at all. I liked it though! You made the triangle believable and therefore you've got me on board.

Wish!verse Buffy was wonderful and I wish we had more of that Buffy. I thought she was a really interesting addition and made you wonder.

OH and major points for me actually liking this Jo. Normally, not such fan of the Jo

Fantastic job with this. *high fives*

avamclean January 17 2008, 02:10:31 UTC

I do so love surprising people and yay! that I got you to believe this threesome. I adore wish!Buffy as you well know and for some reason she's been stepping up to my muse lately.

Jo wasn't that horrible it's just that they made her too helpful, too sweet. She had no edge and therefore she just didn't fit into SPN world.

BTW: Sting is now string, thanks for catching that.

exposed1 January 17 2008, 03:08:49 UTC

It would've been interesting if they had written Jo differently from the get go. I enjoyed her in later episodes when it didn't seem like they were trying to force Dean/Jo together. She had a good edge then.

Well you surprised and shocked the crap out of me. *grins* Love your muse!

Thanks for participating in the challenge as well. This mod appreciates it!