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Vita Nova. Chapter 2 - Murder Bloody Murder

Sep 16, 2008 09:47

This was a long time coming, but here´s the second chapter of Vita Nova. I´m not sure anyone remembers this story since I posted chapter 1 as far back as June. I´ve included a link to chapter 1, in case you´d like to catch up.

Chapter 1, Beginnings.
http://buffymonmon.livejournal.com/111480.html

And here goes...

Title: Vita Nova
AU
Summary: Jack and ( Read more... )

vita nova

Comments 34

big_heart_june September 16 2008, 09:16:23 UTC

Oh absolutely wonderful! I love what you've done here. Can't wait to find out how their relationship will develop and everything else, how exciting! At first I really really thought Ennis was dead and my heart was racing too..

I'm so thrilled you updated, I really love your style. Thank you! :)

sweetje September 16 2008, 10:08:10 UTC

I wonder what's going to happen when Ennis finally regains his memory. It looks as if he's now becoming attached to Jack, and I wonder if all that will change once he remembers what his true relationship with Jack is.
Wonderful chapter. I'm looking forward to your next update. I am really enjoying this story. : )
Debra

Vita Nova Chapter 2 bmshirts September 16 2008, 10:22:18 UTC

Nice chapter. Seems the new Ennis is interested in Jack, doesn't think of him as disgusting.
I'm glad to see Jack take Ennis away. IT will help cement their friendship into something stronger before Paul finds them. And we know he will. With his money, he will hire as many professionals as he needs to do the job.
I hope by the time he confronts Jack, that both Jack and Ennis are strong enough in their feelings for each other to tell Paul that it's over between him and Jack.
Thanks. Carole

tmn1966 September 16 2008, 10:23:56 UTC

I'm really glad to see this update. This is such an interesting story. Ennis didn't seem upset when he realized that he was attracted to Jack, knowing he has a pretty fiance somewhere. It'll be interesting to see what this trip brings.

Thanks so much for this. :)

Teri

bbmcowgirl September 16 2008, 10:33:42 UTC

Great to see an update. I wonder what Paul is going to do when Jack doesn't show up. It's obvious now that Ennis doesn't hate Jack, he just hates what he represents and what he makes Ennis himself feel but not admit to. It'll be interesting to see Ennis' reaction when he gets his memory back. I just hope that nothing causes Jack to do drugs again, that was too close. But it does prove how much Paul cares for him, poor guy is going to get his heart broke.
Judy