New Fic Begun.... Need feedback please!

[buffyangel68]

This is the first piece I've ever tried to write in this fashion. Please let me know what you think! Thanks in advance

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[anonymous]

This fic is great. I've never seen a story done quite this way. It might be interesting to input further down the road "memories" of the events. But only after we get the total drift from Jim's ramblings. Maybe Blair could start a journal too! Do you have a fic site. If you don't, you should.

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April