When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 9/12

[buffyaddict13]

Title: When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 9/12
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place.
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at hand. it’s demon against man and we’re losing the fight. the

Comments

[coell]

Oooooooooo.... I am SO GLAD you updated this!!! <3 <3 <3

[buffyaddict13]

HI! i am SO GLAD you read this! thanks babeh! :-)

[liptonrm]

I just sat here and read this straight through, all in one big gulp. I couldn't stop or look away or go to the bathroom or anything.

I'm a huge fan of the end of the world and this had a lot of my favorite things in spades. Great Winchester angst and Sam being all evil and then all emo over being evil. It was awesome having Andy be not!dead. Your OCs are well drawn and very engaging, I was pretty choked up when you killed Izzy.

And now here's Rosey! And Dr. Badass is in! You've written a ripping great yarn. You kind of rock (more than a little;-).

[buffyaddict13]

well if it isn't miss clarissa sparklepants! hi! ;D

wow! thank you so much! *blush* i didn't mean to keep you from emptying your bladder. i'm thrilled you like this! \0/ i like end of the world stuff too, so apocolypse high-five!

dude. YOU rock for reading this. trufax. i will try to post the next chapter sometime soon. and by "soon" i mean within the next 2 months. *cough*

[a_phoenixdragon]

OMGILOVEYOU...

I have read this straight through (well, as best as I could) which was why you have had no comments until now. I read through, without hardly stopping for breath - just wanting to absorb more and more of the Fantastic and Awesome that is this story... It is like Stephen King's Desperation, The Stand, and The Dark Tower all rolled into one... It is the quintessential epic apocalypse fic - and I adore it!! You must send more - and SOON!! You are killing me slowly - and it feels damned good!!

I can't pick out any one thing I enjoy - I can't even pick out several - your comments section can't take it - and I'd only wind up telling the whole story again anyway!

Would it be redundant if I told you that I saved this bad boy?

*Whimpers*

*Clings to you*

*HUGS*

[buffyaddict13]

hi sweetie!

*beams*

thank you SO much for the wonderful comment on my fic! *blush* i'm so excited you like my fic so much! *hugs* you made my day, just so you know. actually, my week. possibly my month. so thank you, babe.

*clings back*

[lostandalone22]

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to leave you a comment for this. I love it so much, but I try to find a time when I can devote a lot of time to it and actually enjoy the story for everything that it's worth.

That Jeff guy is amazing. When I read his role, for some reason, I can see Sawyer from "Lost."

I love Dean being so protective and Sammy moving so that he's behind him. That was really cute.

The handful of us who didn't know the name Winchester back then, well, we sure know it by now. Seems fitting John Winchester's boys’re gonna save us from the end of the world.Hee, we all knew they would. This was an awesome line

[lostandalone22]

Aww, Rosie! I loved her and Monica. They just seemed so very sweet, and I'm glad you brought them into the story. I absolutely love that it's Rosie that's been waiting for him. It's seems so very fitting, and I'm surprised she hasn't been worked into the storyline with all the other special children in the show.

I love the full circle effect, that they saved her, so she could help them save the world. It all works so prefectly.

That's so adorable that she parroted Dean's "no way" with a "way." I can just hear her voice.

She jerks a thumb toward Dean and makes a disgusted face. "He thinks you’re hot."
LMAO! Oh, that's so him, too.

That's sad that Rosie saw Sam when he was bad. I love how you show his feelings, though.

Rosie is so mature for such a little child.

Awesome! You have no idea how much that made me smile that "Dr. Badass" was the doctor. Although, I'm not seeing how much he can help Andy, lol. I love Ash just so much.

[buffyaddict13]

sweetie, you don't have to apologize for taking a while to comment on my fic. after all, it takes me a billion months to update. i'm just thrilled you haven't given up on the fic and are still enjoying it. your comments and encouragement mean so much to me. i hope you know that.

thank you. ♥

[faithintheboys]

.......

Okay? Ash being the doctor? Freaking awesome! Rosey and Monica? Perfect? This whole town is amazing and I've fallen in love with your original characters, Izzy and Luke and Craig (even though Izzy's now dead) and this whole thing was amazing. What a journey this story has been so far. Thanks so much for writing it! I am so glad I read this. I can't wait for the rest of the adventure and to find out what else happens in Truth and Consequences. Please update soon!

[buffyaddict13]

hi hon, thanks so much for the wonderful feedback! *beams* i almost have 2 more chapters done, one of them is being betaed (hopefully) this week.

♥

[faithintheboys]

No way, really? That's awesome. I have such a busy week and good use something to look forward to. This story is like chocolate, it's freaking addictiing. And you're so welcome for the feedback, you deserve it for writing such an amazing story!