When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 8/12

[buffyaddict13]

Title: When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 8/12
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place. 
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at hand. it’s demon against man and we’re losing the fight. the

Comments

[curtainpull]

Oh my God, they're waiting for him! Eeep, that's exciting (andkinda scarey too.) This is so atmospheric and brilliant, I'm so glad you updated!

"We’re the good guys."
Yay! I think I cheered a litle when I read that.

Sam's gonna start feeling better soon, right?

[buffyaddict13]

hey you! i'm glad you haven't given up on this yet. do you think it's redundant? do you think sam's too depressed? in answer to your question, he will get better. in fact, keep in mind he used to walk around with his hands tied trying to hurt himself. so...you know. could be worse. ;-P

also, when you read, imagine that vanessa looks like someone named freema and julie's dad david looks like someone named...david. *cough* <----- IS BEYOND LAME. i can't

write my dw/spn fic, so this appeases me. *facepalm*

[curtainpull]

do you think it's redundant?

No way! Fic this good can NEVER be redundant! *attatches self to your ankles*

do you think sam's too depressed?
I ALWAYS think Sam is too depressed. Sam needs to be smily and happy and surrounded by puppies at all times. However, in the context of this fic, I don't think he's too depressed for what he's been through! And you're right, I do love the way he's starting to feel better, *hugs him too*

vanessa looks like someone named freema and julie's dad david looks like someone named...david

OMG! You're totally awesome to put that image in my mind. I think I'm so far gone, when I saw the name David I immediatly went there. Sigh Although now it just hurts me more than ever that David's wife is dead, awww... You're gonna write that crossover someday, right?

[buffyaddict13]

You're gonna write that crossover someday, right?

it's the next thing i want to work on after my wip is done. i'm going to need someone to brit-pick and bounce ideas off of. would you, um, be interested? i have the basic plot. but. before you agree, i have to admit. um. there may be a reunion between rose and the doctor at some point. <-- if that makes you go ewww, i completely understand. some people really hate rose (i am not one of them) and i can't remember how much you like her or if you're squicked by possible rose/ten shippiness.

*runs away*

[jude_91]

*dies of happiness* I've missed this so much! You have no idea how happy I was to see this posted.
The ending leaves me craving for more rightthefucknow, though. But, take your time :)

[buffyaddict13]

hey hon!

1. excellent little miss sunshine icon. :D
2. thank you for the awesome feedback! i'm glad you liked the update. the next update won't take as long. i promise!

*hugs*

[jude_91]

OMG your icon! Sam's looking mighty fine in it. Now I want a cup of coffee.

[buffyaddict13]

*offers you coffee*

:D

[girlfan1979]

but the way Sam bites his lower lip bloody is louder than a shout

Poor superfuckedup!Sam

But he can’t change any of it. All he can do is drive. So he puts his foot down on the gas.

Dean is just made of natural born soldier. "In war, all of the important things are simple, and the simple things are hard."

Dean gives her a look. "Are you a doctor?"
She gives him a rueful look. "I’m a vet."

Hey, my doctor's okay, but I LOVE my vet. I'd never go anywhere else if I didn't have to.

Once again, completely brilliant, mei-mei!

[buffyaddict13]

thank you babe.

but now, looking at this, all i can see is that i used the word "look" twice in a row and it bugs me. *grump* i'ma gonna have to fix that. *facepalm*

Dean gives her a look. "Are you a doctor?"
She gives him a rueful look. "I’m a vet." <--- dun dun DUN

i'm glad you like this, babe. *beams*

OKAY BYE FOR NOW!

[simca23]

I'm not sure if I've ever commented on this story, but I have to say I just love it.

I check every day to see if you've updated and this morning (the first day of my vacation) I saw there was a new chapter and I think I might have squealed a tiny bit.

I don't usually read apocalyptic stories - just not really my thing - but you've created a great world here all dark and scary, but with hope.

And the interactions not just between Sam and Dean, but between all the characters and just wonderful. Spot on.

So congratulations for writing such a great story. I'm really enjoying it and am waiting with baited breath for the next updates.

Kelly

[buffyaddict13]

hi kelly.

I'm not sure if I've ever commented on this story, but I have to say I just love it.

*beams* thank you so much! you have made my day considerably more sparkly.

I check every day to see if you've updated and this morning (the first day of my vacation) I saw there was a new chapter and I think I might have squealed a tiny bit.

excellent! i like to make people squeal. er, maybe that didn't come out right. ;D

I don't usually read apocalyptic stories - just not really my thing - but you've created a great world here all dark and scary, but with hope.

again, thank you. i enjoy dark and scary fic and i'm thrilled you think this story is dark. and i do try for a dash of hope now and then.

And the interactions not just between Sam and Dean, but between all the characters and just wonderful. Spot on.

thank you! *hugs*

So congratulations for writing such a great story. I'm really enjoying it and am waiting with baited breath for the next updates.

i've started chapter 9, so i hope you won't have to wait too long.

[tiffosis]

*floats on a cloud of happy*

[buffyaddict13]

*waves to you on cloud*

i'm glad you liked it! <3