When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 6/12
Title: When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 6/12
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place.
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at hand. it’s demon against man and we’re losing the fight. the ( Read more... )
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place.
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at hand. it’s demon against man and we’re losing the fight. the ( Read more... )
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Sam was so wonderfully scary facing down the demons, and afterwards, too, and I love the way you showed us where he goes when he checks out on the real world. Creepy and wonderful.
Seriously, Andy about broke me in this, and I never saw this coming. Um... hold me?
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i'm sorry i made you want to bawl, hon. i am evil that way. andy, dean and sam all need hugs after this chapter. however, i'm going to hug you instead. *hugs* <--- see?
Seriously, Andy about broke me in this, and I never saw this coming. Um... hold me?
*HOLDS YOU*
i know i was mean to andy in this chapter, but AT LEAST HE'S STILL ALIVE. look at this way. things can't really get worse for him, right? right? ;-P
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It's so well written and just EVERYTHING is perfect. All the characters and all the little details you've included are all so so great. And you balance the humor and the drama so nicely...I love it. I wish I could write as good as you ^^
AND YOU HAVE ANDY! ALIVE! WIN.
I wish this is the way things really turned out. It's so awesome. <3
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i'm so excited you love my story. my story loves you too. especially andy. he thinks you're cute. <--- true!
yes, i do have andy alive. i love that boy. *hearts andy*
I wish this is the way things really turned out. It's so awesome. <3
thank you SO much. i think YOU are awesome for taking the time to read my fic and liking it so much. *loves you*
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he thinks you're cute. <--- true!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
hee.
TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO KEEP HIM ALIVE! D: I don't know what I'll do if he doesn't live...again! D:
awww! *loves you back!* :D
I forgot to mention before the lyrics that you have at the beginning of the chapters! They're so perfect :D I downloaded the BOC song from the last chapter as soon as I read the lyrics. I was like 'NO WAY! MOST PERFECT SONG EVER!' I can't believe theres actually a song with 'Psychic Wars' in the title! (It actually made me wonder if that's where Kripke got the WHOLE IDEA lol)
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i'll give you a head's up: andy will not die. nope. not ever. not in MY fic anyway. :D shhh. don't tell.
and i'm glad you like the music quotes! i never know if people get annoyed by them or like them. so i'm super excited you like them! isn't "psychic wars" a great song?
have an awesome day! <3
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Dean watches them go, bikes racing in tandem. From behind it looks like big Sam and little Sam, and Dean feels pulled between the past and present. Sam looks back over his shoulder and flashes a smile at Dean that’s so pure, so honest, so real that Dean has to blink back tears.
I was at work when I read this, 'cause I saw the update right before I went in and I couldn't wait eight hours, so I printed and snuck it in to read. And this was so GOOD I damn near WEPT at my cash register, and I should've known that anything this good would go horribly wrong before the chapter's done. And, of course...
She tries to smile. "My boys," she whispers. "My boys are here…"WEPT! Wept, I tell you! Big, fat, salty tears running down my face and dropping on my register! And it's all your fault! ;p ( ... )
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Arrg! You broke my heart TWICE!!!!
i'm sorry! *provides you with lots of duct tape for repairs*
I was at work when I read this, 'cause I saw the update right before I went in and I couldn't wait eight hours, so I printed and snuck it in to read. And this was so GOOD I damn near WEPT at my cash register, and I should've known that anything this good would go horribly wrong before the chapter's done. And, of course...
1. i am so happy you snuck my story into work. this makes my day. thank you for this! <3
She tries to smile. "My boys," she whispers. "My boys are here…"
WEPT! Wept, I tell you! Big, fat, salty tears running down my face and dropping on my register! And it's all your fault! ;phee. i apologize to you and your water-damaged cash register. i was sorry to see izzy go, but her part in the story was done. hey, at least andy's alive, right? RIGHT ( ... )
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1. i am so happy you snuck my story into work. this makes my day. thank you for this! <3
No, thank you! Without this, I usually spend upwards of three hours trying to keep standing on feet that feel like ground beef, staring into space, and trying not to go crazier than I already am. (Seriously. Once I found myself wondering if, should a robber come in while I was away from my register, if I could make it to the paper aisle and crawl in behind the huge bulk toilet papers and build a cave back in there to hide until help arrived.)
hee. i apologize to you and your water-damaged cash register. i was sorry to see izzy go, but her part in the story was done. hey, at least andy's alive, right? RIGHT?Nah, the register is fine ^_~ And I've still got my fingers crossed for Izzy or Claudia ( ... )
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So, I started writing you feedback, saved it 'cause my roommate needed the computer, and forgot to post it. So since I just saw that you posted, I'm re-reading this chapter, posting the fb I forgot to post, and then scurrying onto the newest chapter!
I WIN!!! \O/
(Seriously. Once I found myself wondering if, should a robber come in while I was away from my register, if I could make it to the paper aisle and crawl in behind the huge bulk toilet papers and build a cave back in there to hide until help arrived.)
hee. it also sounds like that might be a good place for a seekrit nap. *nods*
Nah, the register is fine ^_~ And I've still got my fingers crossed for Izzy or Claudia making a reappearance. And yes, at least Andy's alive *glomps Andy*
yay for glomping andy. every should do it. that boy needs some hugs.
I still went WTF anyways ^_~ but after a while I figured out what was going on, so it's all cool.
whew!
Running off to read chap 7 now! Woo!thank you sweetie. and also? i anya icon rocks ( ... )
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Hate you, but I'll hate you more if you don't update soon ^_~
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*grieves for them*
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*hands you tissue* i was mean to sam and andy (and izzy!) this chapter, i admit it. but there is some light coming, i promise.
thank you for reading, hon. i hope you are having an awesome day! ♥
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