When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 5/12

[buffyaddict13]

Title: When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 5/12
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place. 
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at hand. it’s demon against man and we’re losing the fight. the

Comments

[lostandalone22]

I'll come back in a couple of hours and leave a more detailed comment, but yay for a new chapter. I'm really loving this story.

[buffyaddict13]

thank you! <3

[tabaqui]

Ahhhhhhhhh. I luff. The conversations that Dean and Sam are having, little bits of memory and such.

And Sam's *trying* but oh, man. Dean, *watch him*.

And...the tattoos, and Andy'n'Izzie, and piggyback rides...
Yay!
Good stuff.
:)

[buffyaddict13]

TABAQUI! *waves* hi! how are you?

hee. i totally heart andy'n'izzie. i'm glad you're liking this, babe!

Good stuff.

thank you so much!

*hugs*

[tabaqui]

Hi hi!
I'm good.
*beams*
*smooch*

[lorely_lane]

*squees* An update, hurray!

I don't think I have the words to tell you how impressed I am with this story. For one, it's pretty much the only story featuring evil!Sam (even if only briefly or in flashbacks) that I can read. Never liked the evil!Sam plot point but you pull it off somehow. *amazed* Secondly, you write good OCs which is the mark of a truly good story. Not just OCs I don't mind or are okay, but ones that I'm actually emotionally invested in as well as in Sam and Dean. Very rare. :)

And this chapter just made me smile. Sam may not feel like he's getting better, but he is, slowly yes, but he is. I am also very intrigued by where this story is headed - I have no real predictions and am completely at your mercy in that regard.

Bravo! :)

P.S. I read somewhere someone comparing this story to The Stand. I've not read it so I don't know how accurate that it, but if so, nice little self-referential moment ^_~

[buffyaddict13]

hey you! :D

I don't think I have the words to tell you how impressed I am with this story.

*beams* thank you! <3

For one, it's pretty much the only story featuring evil!Sam (even if only briefly or in flashbacks) that I can read. Never liked the evil!Sam plot point but you pull it off somehow. *amazed*

thank you more! i like evil!sam, but only to cause regular sam more angst. i guess that makes me evil, huh? ;-P i love my sammy good not evol. i'm so honored that you don't mind the evolness of my sam.

Secondly, you write good OCs which is the mark of a truly good story. Not just OCs I don't mind or are okay, but ones that I'm actually emotionally invested in as well as in Sam and Dean. Very rare. :)

*blushes like fool* that means SO MUCH. i think one of the things that ruins otherwise good stories is an oc that you just can't care about. i'm thrilled you like my ocs. i am pretty fond of izzie. *pets her*

And this chapter just made me smile. Sam may not feel like he's getting better, but he is, slowly yes, but he is. I am also

[kroki_refur]

Hiiiii! Look! You posted! And it's so shiny. *pets* So you're going to send me the next chapter, like, today, right? *waits*

(I just wanted to say hi, really :D)

[buffyaddict13]

BABE!

hi! yes, my story is very shiny because a very cool person polished it for me. :D

yeah, i'll totally be sending chapter 6 to you today*

*if "by today" you mean next week

hee. just kidding. maybe. i'm going to try and get some writing done soon.

[barkinmad]

Oh man. OH MAN.

So, how much do I want to be Luke pulling at the tufts of Darling Sammy's hair? Even if he is dark and afflicted... and he is getting better, right? Because he's joking unintentionally like that part...

Dean grins and Sam can’t help smiling back.

Sam’s lip twitches ever so slightly.

See? Subconscious spasms of joy! Well, not joy...but smiles!
You don't know how much I want Sammy back...

And why do I get an awful, dreadful feeling whenever I read the conversation about Luke not getting a protection tattoo?

[buffyaddict13]

hee! i'm glad you liked this chapter. i was afraid it would feel kind of boring compared to some of the others.

See? Subconscious spasms of joy! Well, not joy...but smiles!
You don't know how much I want Sammy back...

i want sammy back too and i'm *writing* the darned thing. *eye roll*

thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked this. it means a lot to me. <3

*hugs sam*