When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 3/12

[buffyaddict13]

Title: When Heroes Go Down (They Go Down Fast) 3/12
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: a strong R for language and a lot of violence. some of it's fairly gory. sorry folks. the end of the world isn't a shiny happy place. WARNING: this chapter has self harm and describes yucky violence.
Characters/Pairings: sam, dean, andy, OCs. Gen.
Summary: The war is at

Comments

[reallythateasy]

See, the second I saw this posted I was all excited because I wanted to see what happens next. There are so many parts in here that I just thought were so great, apart from that detailed description of Dana cause OMG EEK. Wonderful chapter.

Now, I need to go read something happy because Sammy is making my heart hurt.

[buffyaddict13]

thanks babe! but i'm sorry sammy made your head hurt. *hugs you and offers aspirin*

[digitalwave]

Gosh, sweetie, I know I should be trying to sleep but I just inhaled your story. It is so darned good. Your OC's are wonderful, I really ached for Patrick, and your Dean and Sam are so real it hurts.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I can't wait to see where you take us next.

Thank you for making my day better. I'm acually going to go and try to sleep now.

*hugs*

[buffyaddict13]

*beams*

sweetie! thank you so much for your kind words. i'm so excited that you like this! and i made your day better? *jumps up at down* that is awesome!

i hope you had good sleep, hon. i know it's a stressful week, but i'm thinking of you.

[lostandalone22]

The food choices you had them find are awesome. Such good no nutrition food

[buffyaddict13]

if sam wasn't so messed up, he'd really want some vegetables by now. :-)

i'm glad you liked the izzy pov. i wasn't sure if people would go for that. i'm thrilled you did. i like her, and i think she's fun to write.

You have no idea how much I love the scene where Dean finds Sam self-injuring. It's so intense, and so emotional, and shows how much they care for one another.

thank you sweetie. i've had first hand experience with such things and i was really squirmy writing. i thought it was utter crap by the time i finished, but i'm relieved you thought it was well done. *and* you liked it. poor dean.

thank you so much for the awesome feedback! i'm so excited you're reading this!

*sends you good vibes*

[ongiara]

Sam’s stomach falls, and he tries to move, but it’s too late, because the dark eyes go wide with shock, then horror. The woman’s mouth opens and Sam wants time to stop, just stop. His heart hammers, his hands shake. Please, not now, not ever, don’t let them know what...
Just loved the suspense here. The encounter with Dana was sobering and shocking, and seeing Sam being confronted with his biggest fears and mistakes and what followed made me feel for all of them. You had me on the edge of my swivel chair nervously swaying back and forth the whole chapter.

Izzy's honest and tactful talk with Sam at the end was well done and there's this hope that they might be a step closer to being okay.

Awesome work and can't wait for the next chapter :)

[buffyaddict13]

You had me on the edge of my swivel chair nervously swaying back and forth the whole chapter.

yay! *hugs you*

Izzy's honest and tactful talk with Sam at the end was well done and there's this hope that they might be a step closer to being okay

uh, they're getting there. maybe. ;-)

thank you so much for reading, hon! i'm so excited that you still like my story.

[tabaqui]

Ah, boys, boys, boys.
*pets them*

Pity they couldn't stay at Apple Camp. But, yeah.
*pets Sam*

And yay, Izzy, for coming out of herself and *talking*! Yay!
:)

[buffyaddict13]

And yay, Izzy, for coming out of herself and *talking*! Yay!

i know! she kind of kicks ass. thanks for petting the boys. then need a few hugs right about now. :-)

i hope your day is made of awesome.

[tabaqui]

*smooch*
Well, i have orange juice. And the windows are open to let in the fine spring breeze.
So.
:)

[buffyaddict13]

that sounds awesome! no spring breezes here. there is lots of rain, however. bleh.

*smooches back*