The Thin Ice 2/3

[buffyaddict13]

Title: The Thin Ice 2/3
Author: buffyaddict13
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean, OFC, OMC / gen, no pairing
Summary: An average hunt turns deadly when a mysterious hunter kidnaps Sam and Dean, determined to exorcise a demon from Sam in order to "save" him. Sam and Dean insist Sam's not possessed but Libby doesn't believe them, and with good

Comments

[estei]

OMG! It's here! It's finally here!

I think something happened with your formatting babe, because the last two scenes are posted twice, should this chapter end up with the first "Sam Winchester beat her to it?"

[buffyaddict13]

AAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!1111111111

*deep breath*

okay. you are completely correct. *fixes*

thank you for pointing out my mistake. i spent 2 hours last night trying to squish this thing into 2 chapters and every time lj said "THIS POST IS TOO LONG PLEASE DIE." so finally i gave up and posted it in three chunks but i kept cutting and pasting and apparently i pasted when i should have cut.

THANK YOU KIND PERSON.

*collapses*

[hiyacynth]

DUDE. Did you just kill Sam??? That is not okay with me!!! Please fix it immediately!!@#@!#@#aspdofijasdrl;kjasdf

Also? This fuckin' rocks. Everything's shifting around in here, making it hard (but again, not like, bad-writing hard) to be sure what's really happening, who the villains are. I'm slow, so I didn't pick up that Dell was Steve W until you showed it to me. That's awesome.

Dude. Dean is gonna KILL you when he finds out you killed Sam.

[buffyaddict13]

Dean is gonna KILL you when he finds out you killed Sam.

oh piffle. he'd just make ANOTHER deal with a cross roads demon. yep.

but i didn't reeeeally kill sam. man, i haven't written a death fic in a long time! what's wrong with me?

[blucasbabe]

Dude, this was so good, but didja HAVE to kill my Sammy? It's so heartbreaking, watching Libby realize all her mistakes, and although I should have known Sam had a bad concussion, I couldn't figure out why his eyes would seem black. Good Job.

[buffyaddict13]

there's a third chapter that explains everything. just because sam's dead now, doesn't mean he'll stay that way. *wink*

thanks for reading!