Fast Fiction Challenge: The Golden Wellies

[budgie_uk]

Title: The Golden Wellies
Word: bumpkin
Challenger: Brian Douglas Ahern
Length: 200 words exactly The letter in one hand, a bottle of beer in the other, the bumpkin sat on his porch and contemplated life’s changes and fortunes

Comments

[burge]

If he'sgot the letter in one hand and a bottle of beer in the other, where's he holding that mug that the puts down in the third sentence?

[budgie_uk]

Bugger - it was originally a mug, but I changed it to a bottle. Curses, foiled again.

Seriously - thanks for the headsup.

[kapdwa]

You might want to fix his front lawn as well...

[budgie_uk]

[sigh]

Thanks.

Anyone actually like the story?

[tulip_maria]

Made me smile, in a good way :)

[budgie_uk]

:)

Thanks.