Psh, it is rather good. ;) Granted two of my guy friends and I were totally nerdy, saw it opening night, and went in saying we'd be disappointed if there was no part in first-person POV. And the entire audience cheered when it happened.
What's In a Name? 1/?
anonymous
October 7 2010, 02:28:04 UTC
His head hurt. He couldn't focus on anything else because his head hurt. It was a peculiar sensation, because he hadn't had a true headache unless his neck had been broken, in a long time. He chanced opening his eyes, only to snap them shut with a hiss. Wherever he was, it was damn bright
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What's in a Name 3/?
anonymous
October 14 2010, 17:33:55 UTC
He settled himself onto the strange, squishy bed he'd been lying on before, and the alarms stopped abruptly. "Damn it," he said again, with more feeling this time. "Are you sure you aren't UAC and this isn't some retarded experiment to see how I would react?" he asked quietly, looking down at his hands, which should have carried callouses, but didn't. He was used to field labor, even with researching with the other doctors, and it was obvious that he hadn't done that sort of thing in years
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Untitled 1/?bombsreverseJune 13 2010, 07:06:40 UTC
So, please ignore the title, it's kind of late and I couldn't think of anything suitable. I don't know how much longer it will be past this but I thought that I would share what I have so far. Also, kindly ignore any and all typos.
Hope you like it :)
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He wakes up with fuzzy vision, surrounded by white light and the first thing through his head is fuck... as he slams his eyes closed again against the harsh light. Then his mind wakes up and starts to race to the one place he wishes it wouldn’t as his heart beat spikes, the resounding pings sounding on the machine above him. What if UAC found him and brought him back in for observation and experimentation, it’s not like they’re above human test subjects
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Re: Untitled 1/?
anonymous
June 14 2010, 23:10:45 UTC
OP here!
This is an amaaaaazing start so far. I especially love the details on Reaper's senses. Reminds us that he's enhanced without just telling us, and it's so much more interesting your way.
Re: Untitled 1/?bombsreverseJune 15 2010, 05:29:15 UTC
Thank you so much :) It's actually getting a lot longer than I originally intended. It's currently sitting at about 2,500 words. Give me a couple more days and it should be completely finished.
Re: Untitled 2b/?bombsreverseJune 22 2010, 03:15:54 UTC
The man nods and turns in his seat when another man enters. The newcomer is in blue standing like he has steel strapped to his backbone, his face is unreadable. Dark hair is cut straight across his forehead, severely slanted eyebrows are quirked in the blonde’s direction and John thinks that he can see the tip of a pointed ear
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Hope you like it :)
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He wakes up with fuzzy vision, surrounded by white light and the first thing through his head is fuck... as he slams his eyes closed again against the harsh light. Then his mind wakes up and starts to race to the one place he wishes it wouldn’t as his heart beat spikes, the resounding pings sounding on the machine above him. What if UAC found him and brought him back in for observation and experimentation, it’s not like they’re above human test subjects ( ... )
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This is an amaaaaazing start so far. I especially love the details on Reaper's senses. Reminds us that he's enhanced without just telling us, and it's so much more interesting your way.
Can't wait for more!
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It's actually getting a lot longer than I originally intended. It's currently sitting at about 2,500 words. Give me a couple more days and it should be completely finished.
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