MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

[bubblybliss]

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[yeors]

CLUBHOUSED
☆MUSES: sungyeor

IDOLBOOK
☆MUSES: geniusprone

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

[lightpinks]

I should thank Sungyeol for always poking Naeun on AIM. Haha! It sounds a bit biased (maybe?) but he's a kind of cute and wonderful muse for me. I really like his attempt to affect her with his choding-ness, it does help me because Naeun is such a quiet girl. And they really need to hold that puppy party, haha! Just afraid if BOAF is going to end soon ;; also, I'm looking forward to see them interacting again ♥!

[yeors]

Thank you!! For putting up with his chodingness. Like what we mentioned in your thread, they really should have that puppy party soon! And we're not sure how A Pink's puppies are doing, but.. Infinite's puppies are very large now... O.O Are you biased? Where are you biased? :3 I really do enjoy the more interactions we've been doing, it cheers him up more than you know!

[lightpinks]

Um, responding to your comment above on my thread, I have to say sorry...! ;; Naeun is a real new muse for me and I'm pretty much nervous to play her, so I think that and her voice blended until it makes her a bit... mysterious. :| Maybe I should fix that and, oh well, I'm surprised to know that he thought she's more mature than him. XD And thank you for that, though. :3

Uh, so I didn't sound biased...? Haha, I think I pressed/hid my biasness very well.

And 두누코 are that large!? O: Maybe it's the same as A-PINK's puppies, idk. But maybe Kwikie is smaller than Dalie and Infinite's puppies...

[liutard]

IDOLBOOK;
☆MUSES: radioskulls

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT

This is my first time playing her so any tips/advice etc is appreciated ♥

[candystars]

I hope you realize just how great Amber is. She and Jia are able to converse pretty fluently, but from things you've said to me, I like how you incorporate her lack of Korean ability into other conversations. It's realistic and I'm sure other people appreciate it too!

I also really enjoy how... out of it she seems to be, and how slow she sometimes is to realize what she's even saying. I love that whole herp derp aspect of her character. Amber's one of the members of f(x) I don't know lots about, but from what I do know, she seems wonderful, to me. ♥

[liutard]

I still struggle with bringing in the bad Korean. I often don't know how to do it. But I am trying really hard right now haha. Hopefully it will get better! Or well, worse in her case.

And thank you ;; hearing that does me a lot of good. Because she is new I worried she might not sound like Amber but more like one of the muses I have played. ♥ So this makes me really happy!

[candystars]

I struggled at first with Jia and gradually got better. I still don't think I do it enough, sometimes. So don't panic. It will come with time. ♥

I'm so glad! And lmao I love that icon!

[woon]

Rakuen Yodan/Starhighway
☆MUSE: shfly

Rakuen Yodan
☆MUSE: imyoonie

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Anything would be much appreciated. ♥ I know they are on hiatus right now, but they'll be back pretty soon~!

[beauty]

Okay okay so. I've said it a million times but I really do like your Jongwoon. Despite Sica's recent problems with him, they're not problems that really could have been avoided as a mun. They're strikingly IC for him. To me, the things that he does, I can sincerely imagine the real doing, and you even seem to have to accidental creeper moments down very well too!

I worry about Yoona, though, as does Jessica. I know that she's been through a lot, and it seems to have really shattered her confidence. I know as well that the real has some self-esteem issues, but some of what Yoona's been through has taken it even further than that. It's a pity we didn't know her before it all happened so we had a point to compare from, honestly. That said, Jessica would like to see Yoona start to really get back on her feet. ♥

[woon]

Lmao I know! ♥ I was contemplating if I should leave you feedback because I'm not sure if I have anything new to say. xD And I don't know your other muses. Accidental creeper moments? Lol!

I worry about Yoona too. u___u She has been through a lot and I always tend to get negative crit on her. She actually has been starting to feel better and its been a long time coming. ♥ I'm gonna have more time to get her active once I finish with classes and I hope that will help her too.

[beauty]

Should comment anyway~ ^^ But yeah. The moments when he's accidentally a creeper and he doesn't mean to be. XD

♥ I know you have the potential to play her totally perfectly. Keep working at it. I'm glad she's starting to feel better!

[pyo]

rakuen_yodan
☆MUSES: pyo

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: seulong / taeilfeather / seonggyu / kwangheng / that whole still kicking around crew u-u;

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

[jiyoung]

i keep leaving and coming back and leaving and coming back to this comment ;; i adore pyo tbh. i adore e and jiyoung's interaction, and the fact that he' able to put up with her being childish. a lot of the time, she's worried that he does find her annoying (and she really hopes he doesn't), but i love watching these two talk and play.

and jihyun misses sunggyu!

[pyo]

Lmao he doesn't find her annoying, his attention span is short sometimes so he dips in and out of conversations. He enjoys people willing to play around with him and so enjoys talking to Jiyoung.

Gyu might pop his head back up above ground one day, sigh, idk. u-u; And he says he's sure she's still a poop.

[insoo]

Let's see..to start off I'll say that I don't know an overwhelming amount about block b so I can't say too much on characterization other than that they are a crazy bunch, which Jihoon seems to have that part down just fine! :P

Insoo and I both really like your Jihoon, I'm always looking forward to the two of them interacting as it's so amusing a majority of the time. Jihoon always has something interesting to say or some way to shock Insoo. We really love how fun and quirky Jihoon is as well. Personally I feel that Insoo is a bit bland at a times being that he's still such a new muse, so it's really refreshing to have him able to play against someone who can help bring more of his personality out. I look forward to playing more soon! :)

[softremix]

rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES: softremix

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Oh well... here, I'm pretty nervous. ;-;

[budaejjigae]

I've never said this before, but I really like your Eunji (and Bomi really loves her too, but that's another story lol). I feel like you've gotten her happy-go-lucky personality down really well, and talking to her always cheers Bomi up. Their chemistry is there, in my opinion, and I wish the both of them would get to talk more (they also need to continue their pizza date soon heh). As for writing crit, even though we've only managed to scene once, I noticed that your sentences sound a little...awkward sometimes. I'm not sure if it was because you were tired, or if English isn't your first language, but it's something I just noticed ^^; Other than that, I really like your Eunji muse ♥

[softremix]

God. Thank you! And sorry for leaving that scene, I happened to be so tired and fell asleep. LOL, and yeah, sadly English isn't even first or second language. Which is why did my sentences look/read so awkward and brb sitting in corner like Dalie did everytime, lmao ; w ;

[budaejjigae]

Nah, it's alright, I'm still up for continuing it whenever you're free ^^ I see! Well, I could only tell through our scene, but your posts and comments are still of really good standard, so you don't have to feel bad about it! /bounds over to you like Kwikie does ♥