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The Gift of the Mall Guy

Nov 21, 2004 15:07

Author: alto2
Fandom/Pairing: The West Wing/Josh/Donna
Written for: jo_march
Bath item: Sugar scrub
Rating: PG for pure fluff
Disclaimer: I don't own them. Sorkin used to, Wells/WB/NBC do now. Wish to heck Sorkin were still taking care of them. I'm a teacher, so you know I'm not worth suing. And besides, em_meredith made me do it! The Quakerbridge Mall and everything ( Read more... )

west wing, josh/donna

Comments 22

ladysarahii November 21 2004, 21:02:44 UTC

See, that was fun, wasn't it?

And you had absolutely nothing to worry about. It was great. You made me laugh at loud at the part where Donna thinks about writing a note of sympathy to Josh's mother. It was so sweet at the end, with the note from Josh. And it was all in perfect canon! Yay! You rock!

alto2 November 22 2004, 15:48:25 UTC

See, that was fun, wasn't it?

Hee. Yeah, once I had an idea and got going, it really was. I'm so glad you liked it! :)

jo_march November 22 2004, 00:02:24 UTC

I hope you like, it, Jo, even though it's probably not what you were expecting!

I love it! Josh in Bath and Body Works is comedy gold! You should do this more often.

alto2 November 22 2004, 01:05:20 UTC

Yay!! I'm SO glad you like it. I have to say that there's just no substitute for visiting the scene of the crime--I think I'd still be cursing a blank page if it hadn't been for that. :)

thestickywicket November 22 2004, 03:19:32 UTC

Yay!! I'm SO glad you like it.

See? I told you she would. :) Yay, fic!

alto2 November 22 2004, 12:22:26 UTC

Yes, you did. Thanks so much for all your help! :)

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alto2 November 22 2004, 15:49:02 UTC

Thanks!

ldemosthenes November 22 2004, 00:33:01 UTC

AWW I love it! Sarcasm galore. I just wish Josh and her had experimented with the Cocoa later...and btw, that stuff is really good. It literally makes me hungry.

alto2 November 22 2004, 15:50:12 UTC

I have been fighting the temptation to go and buy some of the cocoa stuff for myself for weeks now. Shoulda put it on my Christmas list.

I'm glad you liked it! And what, you weren't expecting the sarcasm? ;)

kiss_me_cassie November 22 2004, 00:39:10 UTC

I adore the warm vanilla sugar scent! Adore. :)

How cute were the two of them shopping? And then Josh with the sweetness and the gift and the note... awwwww! I heart this. :)

alto2 November 22 2004, 15:51:24 UTC

I heart this.

Yay! I'm so glad! And honestly, that True Blue stuff is just perfect for Josh-snark.