Before My Eyes Part 1

[bubblefairy03]

Title: Before My Eyes

Rating: T

Summary: When Zack was five years old, he decided he wanted to marry Cloud Strife. Looking back, that was probably one of the best decisions he'd ever made. AU, Clack

Author's Note: My first Clack fic, and my first post to LJ! This is also on my FF.net account, under the same username. The premise of this is actually

Comments

[fantasia0829]

I read this fic on ff.net some time ago, and I really loved it. :D While long epics with dramatic romance are always welcomed, fics talking about them leading normal lives and just sharing a relationship just like any other normal couples are just as nice and a very good change of pace.

Thanks for sharing! :D

[bubblefairy03]

Thanks, I'm glad you still like it! :)
I've always felt the same way. I LOVE dramatic stories and epics, but I'm a big believer in true love and romance, and Titanic and Romeo and Juliet stuff just doesn't happen in real life!

[anyssia]

I don't read WIPs usually, but this one kind of caught my eye and I don't regret it!

I really like how you talked/narrate as if it was their doing, and baby!Cloud and baby!Zack getting together at four months was just too cute for words! ^________^

I hope we'll get to see them meet Sephiroth for the first time! (and what about Genesis by the way?)

[shinkirou_hana]

I'm with fantasia, I read this on FF.net a while back and absolutely LOVED it. <3 I'm glad to see you've decided to post it here, too~ Welcome to LJ, by the way, and I hope to hear more from you in the future! <3

[bubblefairy03]

Thank you! I'm still getting used to LJ, but I'm hoping to make a happy home here. Haha!
I hope you all hear from me in the future too. =/ My schedule is so ridiculous right now, I don't have time for anything. . .

[bubblefairy03]

lol! You're just like me! Usually I'll bookmark something for later, but occasionally I'll just keep the tab up and not close my internet for days. XD (and I use FireFox too!!!)
One of my goals with this was to make it as much Zack's story as I possibly could, so I'm glad you thought he was portrayed well! Cloud is my favorite character, but I think Zack is much more fun to write!
Thank you!! I think the first paragraph of any piece of writing is the most important. I try to give all my essays amazing openers, so if I bs the middle a little it doesn't seem as obvious. Haha!
I'm waiting for Google to notice the similarity between the words and give us a FF themed display. . .

:3

[ze_momonster]

Found this fic on FF.net first, and stalked you here. lol, Love this story~

Re: :3

[bubblefairy03]

Haha, thanks! <3 Glad you found it stalk worthy.