Comments | bubblebear488: waking up (Ch.2)

bubblebear488

waking up (Ch.2)

Oct 30, 2005 01:53

Title: Waking up (Ch.1 ( Read more... )

Comments 3

skk670 October 30 2005, 13:10:42 UTC

As I commented on Fanfic.net, you have an unusual and fresh story. However, you need someone to beta your story to clean up the many spelling, grammar and sentence structure errors. It will really help your story flow better. And it is a very good idea.

xxxcinderella November 11 2005, 02:07:42 UTC

I agree!
Very good, though!

Loved it! anonymous June 11 2006, 09:43:56 UTC

hey i love this story plz post more soon!