Hands pulled him to waking, forcing him up. All at once, he found himself seated, arms forced behind himself and held, a hand clamped hard over his nose and mouth. It was a terrifying moment, and he couldn't help attempting to cry out, eyes opening wildly but unable to perceive at first, seeing only the strange glow of the lights in the shrine. He prayed that this wasn't a raid, an attempt on his life, and even as he made out the form of the man kneeling in front of him, sliding his fingers into his boxers, revealing his body's reaction to fear
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Wow. This was terrifically violatingly hot! I loved it. So did Gaius. He does so like to be ravished. I can imagine Head!Six watching this with popcorn and a fiendish grin.
Apparently, Gaius makes a disturbingly hot fraktoy. Really, the only thing that could have possibly made it any more hot in my book would be if Gaeta had orchestrated the whole thing and was standing watching in the background ;) But that's a different story, and this one's plenty hot the way it is.
I totally did not see the end with Tory coming, but it made some sense, seeing as having it there made it a FF plot. (Although now my brain just thought of Tigh joining in and I may be scarred for some time now...)
Strangely, I found the beginning the hottest part, where Gaius is still unsure of what's going on. But maybe that just says more about me than your writing.
Glad I checked back one more time to this slashathon. This was fun.
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Too short, only complaint. :D :D
Write more. That's an order.
<3
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And i didn't see that ending coming at all, but it was a nice touch
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Apparently, Gaius makes a disturbingly hot fraktoy. Really, the only thing that could have possibly made it any more hot in my book would be if Gaeta had orchestrated the whole thing and was standing watching in the background ;) But that's a different story, and this one's plenty hot the way it is.
I totally did not see the end with Tory coming, but it made some sense, seeing as having it there made it a FF plot. (Although now my brain just thought of Tigh joining in and I may be scarred for some time now...)
Strangely, I found the beginning the hottest part, where Gaius is still unsure of what's going on. But maybe that just says more about me than your writing.
Glad I checked back one more time to this slashathon. This was fun.
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