Comments | bsg_hiatusthon: Challenge #1, Prompt #15

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Challenge #1, Prompt #15

Nov 26, 2007 14:58

Author: Bookwormsarah
Rating: U (is this G in the US?)
Genre: Gen/vignettes
Character/Pairing: Helo
Warnings: none
Spoilers: vague and general to late series 3
Prompt: Ten things Helo thinks but never says
Summary: Wot it says in the prompt

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karl agathon, ch#1:fic, gen

Comments 12

rose_griffes November 27 2007, 01:47:47 UTC

I enjoyed this a lot--you've picked up on some details that I would love for the show to address. Nicely done.

brigantia_65 November 27 2007, 03:26:08 UTC

I enjoyed every one of these, but especially the thoughts on books, school (won't be able to look at Helo now without having "Aggie!" in the back of my mind ;) ), his daydreams about family and a "normal" life for all of them, and that last one about the wall. Particularly that last line.

Helo's gotten a lot of flak over the past season and a half it seems, but I'll always have a soft spot for the big lug.

Very nice read. :D

dianora2 November 27 2007, 05:22:02 UTC

I thought this was lovely. Thank you for writing it.

bop_radar November 27 2007, 10:52:10 UTC

Oh! You wrote one of my prompts! :D *bounces*

I really appreciated this insight into Helo's pov, especially his thoughts about his time on Caprica and the way the first piece ties into the last with a streak of (secret) fatalism running through it. I really like that Helo wants to be on the board with the other pilots when he dies too.

nicole_anell November 30 2007, 16:28:07 UTC

This is lovely, I particularly like the bit about the parents left behind on Caprica when Boomer took the kids. That whole scene had totally slipped my mind with regard to Helo and himself having a child now.

I love the last one.