The Other Sister, Part 14

[bsg_aussiegirl]

Title: Break Down
Rated: T
Edith/Various
(300) word ficlet , part 14 in the Other Sister series

Comments

[akachankami]

OMG this is worse than i expected OMG the angst! you wanna kill me! the last line... oh my creys ;_;

well i wasn't expecting cancer and i wasn't expecting maude D:
poor edith ;_; *cries*
what next? ._. i just can't imagine *hugs teddy and rocks back and forth in the corner*

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I know. My shippy heart fought against this chapter for a while. :(

What next? LOL I have some ideas. Must write, see if they turn out or not.

[northeto]

Cancer?!
You are an evil, evil woman.
I really like the structure of this chapter. It makes for very effective storytelling, even if it is an evil, evil plot twist. :)

“Why do you think I spend time with Michael, Mary? Tom? Because he’s the only person I know who doesn’t treat me like a child.”
This sounds exactly like Edith.

[bsg_aussiegirl]

I know. Evil. I was originally thinking he could be blind and just know it was her, so my romantic heart was still working... Then I got evil.