Also, Bill's comment about Laura being family made me SQUEE out loud Oh yeah. Bill declares his feelings to others in ways like this all the time in canon, so I think he'd for sure say something like that.
YAY!!! I love it so far!!! The perfect mix of fluff and angst. Wonderful opening with Bill filling out his logs and Laura watching him. I love this line She’d been letting him take the punches for her. So perfect and so Bill!! And this line Their flirting meant nothing, but represented everything. That just does it right there for me, you totally hit the right button!! :)
Other great moments, spot on for the dinner scene, perfect dialogue and the Kara/Lee/Dee addition. I think we really missed some interesting conversations like this. I love Laura thinking of how different things were with Bill backing her up in a crisis instead of Adar pulling the rug out from under her.
Lovely scene on the couch, a little leg massage to lighten the mood, epic use of canon lines, "you're always welcome in one of my beds" is a classic!! A dose of reality at the end and some angsty heart stabbing. Poor Bill and Laura, they both need a hug!! Is that where Cottle comes in? ;) Heh
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Mixing fluff and angst is tricky! LOL Maybe I should say it ended up being a mix of romance and angst. I'm not sure about fluff. :)
Other great moments, spot on for the dinner scene, perfect dialogue and the Kara/Lee/Dee addition. After I wrote that bit I realised poor ol' Dee hadn't said anything! But then I thought 'oh well, sounds typical of Lee to talk over the top of her anyway'. *snort*
Lovely scene on the couch, a little leg massage to lighten the mood I was hoping to convey how utterly comfortable they are in each other's company. Hee.
Is that where Cottle comes in? Hee. He'll be along soon enough. :)
Thank you for the generous donation. Keeping up with the natural disasters around the world is a sad task. Let's hope that people in the areas being affected now have the same spirit as the Queenslanders showed, and can find a way to cope.
Oh God, Lee is such a tool. Bill needs to pound him the boxing ring. Yes, well, rewatching those eppies really make you realise that Lee and Bill and Laura were walking a real thin line before Lee's final betrayal in Crossroads. He's in his father's quarters quite a lot, and fighting with him etc.
I'm already loving this. Yay!
Of course, I love everything you write Double yay! And that's a lovely compliment. Thanks. :)
You had me at Pissy!Lee. You know us too well! It was obvious Lee had Issues about Laura shaking up with Daddy, so that's a nice shoutout. Plus the ominous signs that Laura is Not Well.
And Can't Everyone Get Along Bill! So cute! The poor fool. Yet oddly, perhaps he's the least clueless one of them all. They need each other and should be working together, and instead, they snip.
But I must say, no nookie on New Caprica? Well, well, our smut queen.
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My heart is aching for them right now.
I think you have found a wonderful mix here of RCT (the banter is so lovely and cute) and Angst (see *tear* above).
Plus you have made me want to bitch slap Lee, which is always a bonus in any fic.
I love this so far and eagerly await the next chapter.
Thanks, I so needed this tonight.
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We'll have to think of a new acronym that describes romantic angst.
Glad you enjoyed and it made you feel better tonight. Hope you like the rest.
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Also, Bill's comment about Laura being family made me SQUEE out loud, no joke.
I am very much looking forward to more! <3 :D
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Also, Bill's comment about Laura being family made me SQUEE out loud Oh yeah. Bill declares his feelings to others in ways like this all the time in canon, so I think he'd for sure say something like that.
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Other great moments, spot on for the dinner scene, perfect dialogue and the Kara/Lee/Dee addition. I think we really missed some interesting conversations like this. I love Laura thinking of how different things were with Bill backing her up in a crisis instead of Adar pulling the rug out from under her.
Lovely scene on the couch, a little leg massage to lighten the mood, epic use of canon lines, "you're always welcome in one of my beds" is a classic!! A dose of reality at the end and some angsty heart stabbing. Poor Bill and Laura, they both need a hug!! Is that where Cottle comes in? ;) Heh ( ... )
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Other great moments, spot on for the dinner scene, perfect dialogue and the Kara/Lee/Dee addition. After I wrote that bit I realised poor ol' Dee hadn't said anything! But then I thought 'oh well, sounds typical of Lee to talk over the top of her anyway'. *snort*
Lovely scene on the couch, a little leg massage to lighten the mood I was hoping to convey how utterly comfortable they are in each other's company. Hee.
Is that where Cottle comes in? Hee. He'll be along soon enough. :)
Thank you for the generous donation. Keeping up with the natural disasters around the world is a sad task. Let's hope that people in the areas being affected now have the same spirit as the Queenslanders showed, and can find a way to cope.
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I'm already loving this. Of course, I love everything you write :)
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I'm already loving this. Yay!
Of course, I love everything you write Double yay! And that's a lovely compliment. Thanks. :)
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And Can't Everyone Get Along Bill! So cute! The poor fool. Yet oddly, perhaps he's the least clueless one of them all. They need each other and should be working together, and instead, they snip.
But I must say, no nookie on New Caprica? Well, well, our smut queen.
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No nookie on NC? Did I say that in this chapter? *checking* mmm...no, you're just perceptive, LOL.
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