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[spamdilemma]

Title: thy delicious notes
Author: spamdilemma
Author's Contact Info: spamdilemma@livejournal.com
Rating: pg
Genre: series of vignettes
Pairings: Zak/Kara, minor Lee/Kara
Summary: "Caroline writes to Kara the following week, and the week after."

Title taken from Allen Upward's poem "The Stupid Kite"

Comments

[shadowserenity]

Beautiful. I had to read this in silence because it really caught me and wouldn't let go until the end. I love the quiet elegance of Caroline Adama, and Kara's line about her wasting stationery especially. Thank you for sharing :).

[spamdilemma]

Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. :o)

[gillian37]

Someone rec'd this and they were spot on. This is a lovely, heartfelt piece. Beautiful writing. Having insight into Caroline certainly adds depth to both Lee and Kara.

This is a piece that will stick with me for awhile. Thanks for sharing.

[spamdilemma]

Thank you for the kind feedback! I'm glad you stopped to read and comment. :o)

[zorb]

That was just lovely. I really like your Caroline, and her PoV and focus on her relationship with Kara was a fresh take on this backstory.

[spamdilemma]

Thanks! It's good to hear what parts you felt worked well. :o)

[liminalliz]

Oh, I LOVE CAROLINE ADAMA, that was fabulous. "His face is buried in his pillow, and for a long, almost ridiculous moment she thinks he's crying. He's not though, he's just breathing." made me all WEAK AT THE KNEES. Oh, this fic is fantastic.

[spamdilemma]

Oh, yay! That was one of my favorite parts to write, actually. Lee + pillow used by Kara = ♥

Thanks for reading and commenting. :o)

[peri_peteia]

Lee leaves and Kara sets a date; Caroline sees these things as unrelated. She tries to.

Oh...oh.

This fic is wonderful. I am obsessed with preseries fic and even more obsessed with the saga of the the Adamas and their Kara. I always wish there was more fic about Caroline, because I find the unknown quality there so intriguing.

You pulled this off beautifully. Which is good and bad since it increases my yearning for moooore. Gah.

[spamdilemma]

Oh, thanks very much! I was kind of sad to finish this and have to say goodbye to Caroline. I don't know if I can write more about her, though; I did cut a lot out of this story since those scenes either felt off or were headed towards The Melodrama.

Anyway, I appreciate the feedback! :o)