Baby-Sitters Beware! 1-5 (Part 1)

[mizusu_mal]

This story starts off with Kristy in the club notebook. “Shadow Lake. The name sounds full of mystery.” Sounds like something a poet would write. Nope it’s just Ann. M Martin-Er-Nola Thacker. Yeah, Nola Thacker. One of the ghosties…

The "prologue" of this talks about the club notebook, blah blah blah and how this adventure was like something from

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[xenaeilonwy]

Mallory volunteered. “I start from the middle and dip the cream on one end and eat it like that!”

“Nobody likes you, “ Claudia sneered dryly.

My god did I ever laugh.

Except Mallory would never use exclamation points. xD

I want Slenderman to stalk Mary Anne.

[masterdivinity]

A tiny man covered in black clothes (NOT RACIST AT ALL!!!) jumps out of a window

I don't know exactly what you mean by this, but there is nothing racial about a man wearing black clothing. People wear dark clothing at night so they won't be noticed, which presumably this man was doing..

[xenaeilonwy]

Yeah, this I didn't get either. It said he was WEARING black, not IS black.

[mizusu_mal]

Fixed the sentence so it doesn't bring any more confusion. //.//

[author_by_night]

*Mod poke*
Logan gets called a jock by Jessi-the-black’s mind

We don't snark the characters for their race, religion, or anything else - we only snark when the books make a big deal out of it. On that note, I'd like you to please edit this. Thank you for understanding.

[mizusu_mal]

I fixed it to something more appropriate. You see, I'm still a newbie here.
Logan is called a jock by Jessi-the-ballerina's mind.
Thanks for pointing this out. I should've revised it more carefully.

[mizusu_mal]

If you guys see anything more offensive in here, please tell me so I can fix it.
Thanks for your understanding!
-Megan, AKA mizusu_mal.