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Fic: Impressions on Apartment 3J (due South)

Jul 16, 2008 21:02

Title: Impressions on Apartment 3J
Pairing: Fraser/Vecchio
Rating: PG-13 (sorry, Bel; porn next time, I promise!)
Summary: Six places Ray's fingerprints ended up in Fraser's apartment.
Disclaimer: I am but mad north-northwest, and as the wind is southerly, I know characters that are mine from characters that are not mine. These are the latter ( Read more... )

due south, fic

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belmanoir July 17 2008, 04:15:30 UTC

omg brynn!! i love you! thank you SO much! already way past my bedtime so can't read, but FIRST THING after work tomorrow! so much joy!!!

snoopypez July 17 2008, 04:34:11 UTC

okay, so I kinda want you to write for every single thing on the list of places his fingerprints could be. That's not unreasonable or greedy, right ( ... )

brynnmck July 17 2008, 22:49:58 UTC

I kinda want you to write for every single thing on the list of places his fingerprints could be

Hee! Yeah, that's kinda how I ended up with the "six things" format--the prompts were all so awesome, I couldn't decide! I couldn't even keep it to FIVE things! *g*

As time goes on, it's so clear, so obvious how much closer they get, how they can READ each other.

EEEE, yay! *claps hands delightedly* That's exactly what I was hoping would come through.

I'm so so happy you liked it. Thank you so much! *smishes you*

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brynnmck July 17 2008, 22:53:54 UTC

Yay! That took me about an hour to think of. Hee. And we'll just pretend the original version of that line never existed, 'kay? *facepalm*

Thank you again! BOYS!!

mrs_laugh_track July 17 2008, 05:10:23 UTC

Ohmygod FABULOUS.

1. Awww. See this is so perfect because it's so them at the very beginning of season one and you can feel that. They haven't quite grown into that sort of psychic bond team that they are later in the series, but still there's that connection between them.

Ray's smile slanted wry across his face. "Yeah, I'm worried that one of these days you're gonna be leaping tall buildings and need to readjust gravity or something and the rest of us are gonna end up on Mars."

Laughter, then, though hiding it behind solemnity was more fun. "I would certainly warn you before I attempted to alter any major laws of physics."

"See?" Ray said, grinning. "Like I said. Nice guy."2. Ray and Chicago FOREVER. And just the idea of Fraser learning to feel a bit of love for the city through seeing Ray's love for it is wonderful. And also aww, how much do I love that Fraser sees Ray as so brave (which HE IS)? I love it a lot ( ... )

brynnmck July 18 2008, 15:44:45 UTC

YAY, thank you! I'm so glad that the progression of their relationship was clear, and yes, I have a pretty big soft spot for Ray/Chicago. :) And I will also admit that I got choked up while writing the post-Wild Bunch part, because OMG, that episode is SO off-sides. (I had to go snuggle my puppydog afterward. Hee.)

Thank you for the lovely feedback; I'm so glad you liked it!

belmanoir July 18 2008, 16:52:16 UTC

Ray/Chicago=OTP!!!1!

mlyn July 17 2008, 07:00:30 UTC

It's a good thing that DS Match isn't Romance vs Angst again, because YOU JUST WON ANGST.

I want to say more, but I really need to get to bed. Be back later!

brynnmck July 18 2008, 15:45:17 UTC

Awww. But it had a happy ending! Look! They're happy! *smooshes them together* Hee.

Thank you! ♥

mlyn July 27 2008, 23:34:34 UTC

Hi, I'm back ( ... )

brynnmck August 9 2008, 03:51:12 UTC

*beams enormously and HUGS you* Thank you so much! What incredibly lovely things to say--thank you for taking the time. I really love this thought:

The Norton is Fraser as an open book.

AWWW. You said it better than I did! ♥

I'm so thrilled this worked for you, and the Fraser POV especially. I adore writing Fraser POV, and it's wonderful to know you enjoyed reading it. Thank you! *more HUGS*

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